 fooboo24 2009-04-17 . chapter 3Oh! Ooh! OH! You have to finish from that! U can't leave it hangin', nope. I mean, Kitty dying? I know she won't, but it would be interesting to see how Pietro reacts. And how Lance reacts to Pietro's reaction. And how everyone reacts to Lance's reaction to Pietro's reaction! Action Reaction, awesome, ain't it? Well, POSITIVELY WONDERFUL story! Keep it up and update soon! U are a good writer! |
 Wanda W 2008-10-12 . chapter 3Okay, Jean is seriously annoying and the saddest part is that it's not even ooc from the show. I found her completely obnoxious there, too.
LOL! Jubilee is hysterical. I loved Kitty's realization that none of these guys are exactly the sharpest knife in the drawer.
Oh no! That's terrible. So what really happened? Who's responsible for the 'accident'? What was their motivation? Way too many cliffhangers... I can't wait to find out some of the answers.
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 Wanda W 2008-10-12 . chapter 2Oh please! Of course you agree with her, Scott... I swear the two of you share a brain! Jean, it's called fun. Try having some sometime. These two can be so annoying sometimes. Yeah! What Rogue said.
That's right, Kitty... O, I think they ticked off Amara, too. Big time. Oh Lord! Jean's not their mother for pity's sake; she's not even that much older than them. Could she be more arrogant? Nope, didn't think so.
Ouch! Way to be sensitive, Pietro. He is such a guy! Oh no. Not only what she already thought, but what will happen when Lance hears the rumors? At least Rogue will believe her pretty quickly, once she tells her what really happened.
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 Wanda W 2008-10-12 . chapter 1I loved the different predictions and the warnings they contained. Boy I'd give a lot to know what she had to say to Pietro and his date! I feel bad for Lance, but he does need to move on.
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 Drackial 2006-12-10 . chapter 2Nice, chance is a funny thing. And now both Rogue and Kitty are confused X3 |
 felinefairy100 2006-11-18 . chapter 2please update! |
 rcr 2006-07-02 . chapter 2Oh, no. What will her new boyfriend and Lance think? OH, the drama! gotta love it. |
 rcr 2006-07-02 . chapter 1interesting story can't wait to read more. |
 Zaya 2006-04-10 . chapter 2This is good so far. I like the gypsy. She was cool. But you know what would make this story better: another chapter!
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 FireFox ShadowWolf 2006-02-18 . chapter 1this is great. |
 PyroSprite 2006-02-04 . chapter 2good chapter, update soon!!
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 L'ange-Sans-Ailes 2006-02-04 . chapter 2very good story, please up-date soon. |
 somekindafreaky 2005-11-26 . chapter 1Yeah new story! I presume it's kietro, which is always welcome in my book. That class must definitely have helped because your writing is great now! Very fluent and smooth. I don't think you really need to rewrite any of your other stuff, but if you think it'll make them better, go nuts :) |
 Ladyflame13 2005-10-26 . chapter 1lol, dis is very funny! update! |