 speadee 2007-07-11 . chapter 1Good story! |
 Cheska 2007-04-29 . chapter 1That was sweet. :D |
 Trumpet-Geek 2007-01-24 . chapter 1Lol nice.
Des Moines is Iowa's capitol, by the way:P |
 blood red tensai 2006-10-28 . chapter 1good story, but i thought that echizen won the us open! it said so in the first episode of the ova. |
 The Eye of the Crow 2006-09-21 . chapter 1Aw, it made me melt inside, so cute and serene... I don´t mind all those TezuRyo based on steamy sex, but they somehow didn´t make it to my favs. This story did. |
 Bloodied Wings 2006-08-27 . chapter 1^^ Wonderful as usual, SVZ. This story was a product of a genius and that genius was obviously you. I haven't seen any of your writing in a while so it was nice to come across this happy little fanfiction while searching for TezuRyo. Good work. |
 Imaginator 2006-03-07 . chapter 1I found this simple and pleasant reading. ^^ I think you did a good job depicting the characters. Keep up the good work! |
 Animegoil 2006-03-03 . chapter 1Very sweet, in character, and romantic without being over dramatic. I loved it! Their dialogue was so telling of themselves, and I just really liked the setting of the fic and the gentle mood about the end. ^_^ Totally awesome! |
 Ishka 2005-12-22 . chapter 1aw... wow. that really made my heart feel warm.
nice contrast to the freezing weather here XD
thanks so much! i really, REALLY loved you characterization of Ryoma here.
and this: /“I hope you weren’t offended when my mother commented on your size.”/ totally pwned me XD
(adds to faves) |
 whiterose03 2005-12-20 . chapter 1utterly cute |
 kayue 2005-10-31 . chapter 1Nice fic as always.
Of course Ryoma lost. And of course, he thought there might be a possibility of winning. That's Ryoma.
I love the soft, understated tone of this piece, the details of his tiredness, and missing his cat.
And your last lines (as always) are spot on. |
 ennov 2005-10-22 . chapter 1Hey this is nice haha keep up the good work ... |
 Kalamity Kat 2005-10-22 . chapter 1Ryoma lost? For the sake of all that's high and mighty... ;__;
Ahem, I'm cool now. Okay, I will totally not comment how Ryoma sleeping in Tezuka's bed is making me squee. 'Cause it isn't. Really. Really. Believe me yet? :D
Other than that, a lovely drabble. I love it how Ryoma is still looking for Tezuka's approval, and only that could make him sleep well. Then again, everone always forgets that he's only 12 - too much pressure on him. Hell, I don't want to remember he's just 12. ;P
Oh yeah, sorry. I digress. Very lovely. Oh, just one minor thing I'd like to point out, since it slightly confused me - Tezuka and his pyamas:
"And he managed to make them look dignified in them too."
Is that that he managed to make the pyamas look dignified, or did he look dignified in 'em? Just thought I'd ask.
Other that that, wonderful drabble. You're getting better and better with every one. ^_^ |