write more it's good

ugh.. omg! shes such a b*h. that b*hy a$$ muh'f**king whore! damn! whut a fuggin slut.. if i evr meet anyone like that, i swear imma slap her so hard. i hate those kind of people. ARGH!

sorry for being so violent... like you said, she was annoyingly annoying.. she got on my nerves

i wanna slap roy, too. for being such a stubborn butthead.. im like just go to her, cuz she luvs you too! forget about that whore. youre just wasting your time on her.. its like forget about your reputation and pride and stuff.. this is more important!

anyways, good chapter! i really really like it! its uber awesome. evn though i hate The Date, it wouldn't have worked without her..

update soon!

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._. Wow. I just don't know what to say anymore. This story is just too GOOD. Wow.

No, it's okay about her behavior. Again, as you pointed out, she's a human being too lOlz, and allowed to show emotions. But wow...you portray her wonderfully. And kudos for updating so quickly _

E! Goodness, I LOVE LOVE LOVE this fic. Awesomely amazing. Deserves a review for each chapter _

This chapter was *SQUEAL*! XD Soo funny and sweet and funny! Love itt

*runs to next chapter*

WOW! Aw...this was a beautiful chapter. WONDERFULLY written...you almost made me cry for poor Roy! ;_; i LOVED that whole blonde thing...reading this just made me go "AW! *minisniff*"

On to the next chapter!

aww, poor riza! im about to cry. i feel the same way with sum guy who knows im there and existing, but chooses to ignore me anyways... we used to be good frends and all, but now hes ignoring me.. and im like WTH? ugh! im so angry with him, but i also sad that hes not even saying hi when i walk by... it hurts so bad. i hate him, but i cant stop liking him.. wah! T.T

well, enuf rambling of my pathetic luv life..

i really liked this chapter especially riza's emotions and actions... like i said i know how she feels and i can relate to it. its awesome!

i hope you write more!

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"but then she turned away, lips pressed together and her stomach clenching painfully. He could clean up his own messes from now on."

LOL that was so funny! I wouldn't clean up after someone who yelled at me either...lol God im into this way to much!

I love how she has been trying to hide her feelings for Roy and then finally breaks at the end of this chapter and in front of Hughes of all people. Cant wait to read the next chapter! I hope they finally get together at the end even though im still kinda mad at Roy too...lol. Great work keep it up!

good chappy!

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that was another great chapter! Dont feel bad i felt the same way about Roy when i first saw that episode he was so mean thats the only time i have ever got mad at Roy!

You had a few typos. one is here..

“Wha…0.0…” Roy cursed as Hughs, beaming, produced a large box crammed with pictures of his daughter...You spelt Hughes' name wrong and another here...“Besides, colonel,” Roy tried to focus on what Hughes was saying..Colonel would be capitalized since he's talking to him one..“You know, it’s funny, lieutenant-colonel…... Lieutenent Colonel would be capitalized and there isn't a dash between the two words a few more ones here..“Oh, you know,” Hughes said off-handedly. “The bet money. Havoc and Breida’ll both owe me 50 big ones if you ask her out today!”..You wouldn't capitalize 'the' and after off-handedly would be a comma. I'm not sure if Breda has an 'I' in it or You forgot to put a space between this and close right here 'who was thisclose.'

Tight here you forgot a 'T' on thought..."I though he was just happy that he’d grown an inch.” Those are only minor detail but the chapter altogether is soon, please!

aww poor riza!

wow.. awesome!

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Great! Great! Great! This story is awesome please update soon cant wait to see what happens next.

This was also a great chapter. You had one typo though. It's no biggie but you forgot to put a space right here.."and realizing it wasn’ther sleeping beside him…."

Other than that it's great.

GOOD start! I'd love to see where this ends up. Don't worry - so far, Riza's not out of character. You've actually managed to capture who she is without making her an emotionless doll driven by lust or someone with a cold exterior but is (dramatically) really crying inside, and needs Roy to baby her, kiss her boo-boos and make it all feel better. She is simply a very practical woman - but that doesn't make her emotionless or un-distractable! _ You've captured this aspect of her very well. I hope to see some beleivable fluff in the future.

Keep up the good work!

Ciao ;)

Zamnandi

O_O! Gosh, I love this! You are a very, very good writer. The chapter was just the right length, not too long, not too short. Everyone seemed very in-character _

Yaay can't wait for your update!