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I have no more words. This really made me cry TTTT. You are amazing. No, I won't kill you for the sadness...but only because it was so so so SO WONDERFULLY written. If there is perfection in fanfictions, this is it. This is it *nod*

Kyaahh! ;_; Okay...at least this fic isn't over yet... and what are you talking about? My fic is not anywhere NEAR rather awesome...it shrinks to the size of an atom, especially when compared to your writing. Wow. Okay...please do update soon *clings*

...I was seriously crying... Pride kills Martel I think.

Wow... just wow...

The thoughts, the emotion behind them, the imagery, it was all amazing...

The way you described the scene after Pride told Roy his first lieutenant is dead felt so real, like I could see exactly what was happening and hear it. I was in tears by the time Roy started arguing with himself in denial. And I loved this: "Even when they can not find a reason to live, humans oftentimes still do not want to die." Is this a quote from something, or did you come up with it?

Great chapter, please, please, please update soon.

Great chapter, very sad, but oh well i knew this was coming however it was still very good and very well written.

NO! You made me cry! Damn you, you humunculi!

The angst... Oh, the angst! It was so COOL! Even though I was so depressed in this chapter, I absolutely loved it. It was like this one movie... hmm... which one was it?... Dammit! I can't remember! Anyways the guy was crying, and he's like Dammit! Why'd you die...

This was so freaking awesome! I want to hug Roy, don't you?

Love from your stalker... lol!

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0_0... you. you. THAT WAS AWESOME! dont like that Riza is supposedly dead. ;_; i simply cannot allow myself to believe that since she's my fav. i like your potrayal of pride even if it is a little out of character. BTW the chimera's name was marta -martel in Jap version-

;_; This is still amazingly wonderful. It really is. The dialogue was really, really good, as was the imagery and descriptions of action. Wow I know I'm repeating myself here (as usual)...but you're an awesome writer. Wow...

Ah the suspense, the suspense! ...DID you give too much away? O.O *fearing the worst* Ahh but no...I like this story too much and I must keep reading...anyways, you wrote out Pride's powers well, that's why he was able to "predict" Roy's movements and everything else...mann...how in the world are Roy and Riza going to get out of this fix...ARE they going to get out of this? Kyah...

O_O suspence is killing me. This seems like a losing fight. I wonder how you will turn the tables...or will you?

Like I said, you are so freaking awesome!

You wrote this chapter so well, I feel so inferior to you. I am forever your loyal fan/stalker. xD

If this story becomes a movie, starring Roy and Riza, I'd be one of the first ones in line!

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WOWEE WOWEE WOWEE WOWEE WOW!

WOW! That was so totally, and I mean TOTALLY, AWESOME, with a capital A! There was like a movie playing in my head. You wrote Pride and what he said so freaking well... I felt like acting it out, with me as the bad guy. xD And that Juliet Douglas... she was such a... a... bit-, I mean butt head. AH-GRR! I would have punched her. It's like, "Dammit! Let me pass already!" She annoyed the hell out of me... And that's what makes your chapter so awesome... You really brought out my emotions and got me so interested in the story... It's just so captivating!

The bit with Roy and Pride reminded me of Teen Titans when Robin became Slade's apprentice and then Slade was all telling him that they were alike and had all these things in common. lol.

Anyways, AWESOME chapter again!

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"But it was no good. The way things stood now, Riza’s life was about to be rather abruptly cut short….and there was absolutely nothing she could do but sit there and wait."

Please dont kill her *On hands and knees begging you not to kill her*

I have a bad feeling that Riza and Roy both are going to die but if you kill one then please kill the other because i dont want one to have to live without the other :(

But the best thing would be to make both of them get badly hurt or something and then make them finally realize they love each other :) When i saw the last episode of the anime i bout cried when Riza found Roy it was so sad but he LIVED and he should on here too..lol along with her! (Sorry if is spoiled anything about the anime for anyone)

Please update soon and please please please dont kill them...PLEASE!

...this is your first fanfic? Damn o.o

I must say I'm impressed. I like it. I like it a lot

Why am I reviewing on this prticular chapter? Simple, really... I wasn't halfway through this chapter when my monitor fizzed out and went black. I read most of this chapter with a nearly-black screen... heck, I can hardly see what I'm typing o.o THAT is determination.

I think I'll go read more tomorrow when I don't have to worry about sneaking onto a good computer.

Looking forward to more,

Peophin-chan

Yay you updated _ Amazing chapter, as always. Wow, Bradley, or should I say Pride, is really messing with poor Roy. I LOVE how this is builing up the action to both Roy and Riza's fights...even though I'm really, really scared because they both seem to have such a disadvantage! How're they going to stand against the two homunculus? ;_;

Ah...well it is your story. Just...whatever happens...Roy and Riza MUST share a confession or something and let each other know their feelings...

And please keep this story going as long as possible! Five more chapters...okay, but I know you can keep going longer! Keeheehee. 3

As for Pride's powers...he's the Ultimate Eye...sees things before they happen?...agile...only homunculus that ages...uses 4 swords... yeah I don't think I know any more than you keheh, sorry.

NO NO NO! dont end the chapter there I need to know what is going to happen now! Both Riza and Roy is very bad situtions right now please dont hurt them PLEASE! well you can hurt them just dont kill them...lol

Only 5 more chapters left :( cant it be like InuYasha and the energizer bunny and keep going and going?

By the time you finish this i really really hope Roy and Riza both realize they love one another and stop acting so stupid about it..lol and inorder for that to happen they both have to be ALIVE!

Update soon please im dying for more i like the 14 page chapters it keeps me busy longer as soon as i see the email that you hvae updated i read the story no matter what im doing at the time and i read it all the way through i dont care how long!

KYAH! You updated! ;_; Wow...just...just...so beautiful. I could really feel the emotions and tensions between ROy and Riza here. I loved how you inserted their thoughts in their conversations. Kyah...they're both so so stubborn ;_; But that's part of what makes this relationship so fascinating...Ooh and I loved how you wrote the ending to this chapter...;_; so dramatic and sad! XD; Okay, this next comment is the AP English student part of me talking...but I really loved how Roy gave Riza his gun as a hope and promise for his return...symbolic, isn't it...XD;

Ahh...you were watching episode 37, weren't you? XD I agree. When I first saw it, I was like, "O.O No...no wait she wouldn't REALLY..." but ahaha, Buruha XDD. I loved that ep especially because it was military-centric