Whoa. Love the parallels and the juxtaposition here.

woah! how very haunting! wonderful

Tenshi: Ooh... This is really good! (starry-eyed) It portrays how love can become twisted into rage and hatred when a beloved is harmed and/or killed. (sighs dreamily) It's pure poetry!

Kage: But what does everybody mean by 'that episode'?

Tenshi: (cocks head to side) I dunno, which episode are they talking about? (looks at writer) Anywho could you please pm me about which episode your other reviewers are talking about? (clasps hands together) ONEGAI! I'LL BE A GOOD REVIEWER! (puppy-eyes)

well done

Great job!

Outstanding work. Very well written and emotionally charged.

Whoa, very cool, and I just watched FMA these past few weeks on the YouTube. And yeah, I watched that scene like. . . eight fricking times. Go figure. The italics really help to intensify this piece I think. And I really liked the lines: "He was letting himself sin again. She could do no less." Dedication. I must have smiled like an idiot when Roy got pissed in the episode, and it was no different for your story. Nicely done.

0.0 Interesting. I wish you would write more.

Wow, its been a like 8 or so weeks since i saw the ep. and i so remeber that. WOW... it really dose fit the ep work

Oh man, this was my favorite part of the new episode. I wasn't as shocked about how mad Roy acted, but what really got me was how come he didn't even look at Riza and how he seemed to vent his anger out on her to some extent. But your fic cleared the confusion for me. Thanks a lot! This is great!

it's really good insight...but other reviews keep refering to the 'episode'...which one is it?

Interesting insight into that scene. Nice job of fleshing out the emotions. Keep writing!

O.o wow..

i watched this episode last night..

i really liked how you interpreted it.

gave me a whole new look to that part in the episode..

i, being a huge royai fan, was trying to find a reason as to why roy talked to her like that and refused to look at her.. and why riza looked so sad and hurt and confused and blank... you summed it up perfectly in this fic. i absolutely love it!

its just totally awesome!

:]

Very Good.

what the hell? dude... -sinsinsin- ? what the hell?