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| Thunder-Kun 2008-06-03 ch 1,  | abusePoor widdle David. Being on the outside of things by yourself is an awful feeling. |
| oval 2006-11-23 ch 1, | abuseNice. The writing style was very interesting. Good insight into what Hodges might really be feeling and why he's got such an attitude. Aw, poor guy! |
| SarcasmIsMe 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuse*sigh* poor david. |
| IvoryRaven2 2006-03-12 ch 1, | abuseAh, one of those self-fulfilling prophecies, eh? He dislikes them because they won't include him because he dislikes them etc etc. I like the insight you give into Hodges, and the way you've presented the story in a pattern. Very nice. |
| novafan 2005-11-06 ch 1, | abuseYes, I can really believe that this is what Hodges feels. Good story. |
| ShinodaBear 2005-11-04 ch 1, | abuseOh. That was too good. Poor Hodges. Someone needs a hug . . .:) Great insight and all that other good stuff. Wonderful. |
| Alex 2005-10-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was a great story! I've never really liked Hodges much, but your story made me actually feel sorry for the guy and gave reason for how he acts in the show - it would be tough being th outsider to a close knit group of people, not able to join them... Two thumbs up! Love this fic! cant wait to read more of your writing! |
| stoneagequeen 2005-10-25 ch 1, | abuseAw, poor Hodges. Maybe if he didn't have such a distainting attitude, he wouldn't be on the outside, but then again, maybe it's because he feels left out that he has such an attitude. Nice little peek into what might be going on in Hodges' mind. Thanks for sharing. (and I think Nick's accent is charming!) |
| Electra 2005-10-23 ch 1, anon. | abusePoor David. Call me insane, but in a weird way I like him. Can you do something for him? Love, Electra |
| Caster 2005-10-23 ch 1, | abuseLOVED this! Really amazing! It's short but absolutely wonderful. David is my absolute favorite character and you've entered his head, succesfully understanding and portraying his thoughts and feelings. I like how he tries not to be lonely and gives himself reasons to hate the graveyard shift. The last part was rather sad, especially with the use of the word "tormenting". It really hit the viewer, because you understand just how alone he is and it makes you wanna take him and hug him tight (despite his potests at being touched.) Awesome job! Definitely going on my Favorite Stories list. ^_^ |
| angie b 2005-10-23 ch 1, anon. | abusenice insight into the mind of Hodges (an obviously scary creepy place to be *shudders*) its got to be hard to be on the outside looking in especially when what you are looking at is what you want the most..almost made me feel sad for him...almost *grin* |