These are really cute. I love reading about Rory's childhood. Don't you hate Chris? I really hate him. He's the worst father, in my opinion. You should write more of these. Maybe one about the clown who got arrested at one of Rory's birthday parties. That would be good. =)

i think you should include the birthday party where the clown gets arrested... they never said why so you could make it up. just a thought. i think it was her 8th birthday party though so to do it youd have to change that. anyways, i really like your story... keep writing!

That was great. It kinda a scared me when the story was about a man stocking Rory though. This has to be one of the coolest fics. ever though. Its nice to see what your interprettion of when Rory was little is. For some reason I cant picture Lorelai with an 8 year old.

So cute! I have a suggestion if you want another 8-year-old one...in episode 5x13 "Wedding Bell Blues" Luke mentions making her mashed potatoes when she had chicken pox and that's all she would eat for a week...there's no age there so you could stick it in there...it'd be a cool contrast with Chris' sucky fathering!

that was so cute omg it really was!

So cute! I've been thinking about doing this for, well forever, but I'm glad someone did it! I can't wait to see what other ones you come up with! More please!

cute. i liked this chap. please add more soon

That was really good! I really liked it! i Really hope that you write more soon. Just so you know, i'm pretty sure that they got there house when Rory was 11. Cuz in the episode when Rachel came back, Lorelai asked Sookie how come she never knew that Luke had a girlfriend? and Sookie replied you had an 11 year old kid and were just moving in to a new house. Or something like that! i dont remember exactly (Which if you knew me better you'd be making fun of me for not knowing exactaly whut was said, cuz i ALWAYS know!) Well anyway really good story and i can't wait to read more!

That was good but the way Lane and Rory acted seemed a little too old for their age. I dont know maybe it was just me. but I liked the fic! It was a good idea to do all the references.

Aw. This is a brilliant, amazing, ingenious idea for a story. Love it.