good OS

I really liked te story I give it 9/10

I love this alternative ending. Very romantic!

that was seriously beautiful. Not the love-making in itself, bu tthe way they thought of each other and the way they talked to eachother

Aw yay for an awesome missing moment! I love Anakin and Padme's relationship, and you write it so well. And you have a sequel for New Destiny! YES! lol I'm off to read that next ;)

I have to say my favorite parts were when Padme was assessing her looks and when Anakin was telling her why he thought of her so beautiful.

Very nice.

VFA

hot..._...lets continue with the story then...of to the sequel...

That was so sweet, that it was all his gift to her. The characterisations were spot on, and Anakin is a very unselfish lover (a man after my own heart :P). Beautifully written, I loved it x

lovely! you're right on about how both of them would act. Star Wars had so few intimate scenes of Ani Padme, so much was left to the imagination. Bravo!

love the lost scene. Really enjoyed the stories too very engrossing. very well told

Definately sweet! You have a talent for exquisitely portraying your charcters and for that i'd have to say congrats! _

May the Force be with you

Faith.

cute.

Wondeful.

Cool, are you going to continue it?

And the babies were happy!