Thank you! For once an author isn't portraying Mithos as some dranged and angry person since childhood!

Thank you for posting this story...

God knows how long i've been waiting for something like this...

GO MITHOS! *cheers* I like this far! Kee writing! ^^

~Mithos FOREVER!~

A bit too much talking, some parts a bit corny, but kickass action and tons of potential all the same.

I was wondering when an update would ever come. Great chapter! I kind of have to point somethign out though. The Kharlan War was between Slyvarant and Tethe'alla (both were countries before they became separate worlds) over Magitechnology. Half-Elves were just cought int he middle and mistreated all the worse...I think...

I guess it's a bit too late to change anything there...

Well anyway, this was an incredible chapter. I loved the action and how you portrayed Mithos and Kratos. You're style comes across very clearly here! I can't wait to read the next one!

i was so not going to read this...im too lazy...but then i did...and it was good...ive known about this for a while, and i was talking to you as you madde it longer or something

second is the best!

Oh I already read one fo your fics, "Farewell My Shadow". Hm Now I get to enjoyed another great story by you! As I said before, this is a very good and well written account of what may have happend 4,0 years before the game. I'll be keep ing on my Story Alert, 'kay?