Even after several rereads, I'm not sure that I completely understand all the subtleties here. Your writing is beautifully complex, and your portrait of Sasuke is one the most amazing, visceral ones that I've ever read.

This story in one word: bewitching.

Wow...that was really deep...and I loved it! Fabulous job. :)

That story left me breathless! I have never ever read a story with that much power in every word... It was so inspiring to read such phenomenal work! I'm working on getting some ideas for a fic of my own, and Ive never read one that made me truly feel like I was sasuke! Thank you so much for making such a great one-shot. Please send me the link to any other storys you may have writen at . I could just look on your profile but Im reading this via cell phone and so I cant... XP

That was...absolutely amazing. Very well done!

Your writing is very complex. That was beautiful.

This was beautiful.

The imagery, the stars, the characterization. The words. The concept.

beautiful, I always thought too many descriptive words would needlessly complicate and placate a good story, but this certainly proved me wrong. I guess the abstract and extremely poetic prose was the key. Still wow, pretty heart-wrenching there...my favorite kind of story, and conducted in such a masterful way. Kudos to you.

I didn't understand half of the language in this because well, I'm dunce, but this is one of the most beautiful sasunaru fanfics I've ever read in the history of mankind. EVER.

The only thing I'd say was to take out the breaks that you have in the story. I love the way it all meshes into one and you can't distinguish between reality and Sasuke's thoughts. That's what makes it as beautiful as it is. I nearly cried. No, correction, I am crying. If I've already reviewed this, forgive me for spamming... but thank you, thank you SO MUCH for such a moving piece. Sniffle. :3

this was such a good story. great use of language and just... wow. i hope you don't mind the fav?

I honestly dont know what to say. Your writing style is so...mature and amazing. You had me hooked on reading this from the first word! Not many people can really write this well, and definately not here. I'm very impressed...and slightly jealous. How old are you and do you write original fiction as well? I'd love to read more of you work, truthfully. You're an amazing writer. Really. If someone says you suck, tell them they dont know what they're talking about and that you are truly amazing.

If you want to ignore me, go right ahead. I have no idea what I'm saying right now. (sickness sucks...)

Ja,
~Maz-hime

O_O ...

I bow to your genius. *flings herself into a kowtow* All give worship to the Master.

It was sad, and melancholly, but it was bittersweet. I really liked it. It makes me sad, and happy, and then sad again.

--cj

...holy. crap.

whenever i need inspiration, from now on i know where to go... you have inspired me.

dead serious, i cant explain how this has effected me... you are a briliant writer, truly amazing, this oneshot sketch, whatever, is written so poeticly i swear even if it never ended i would still be reading it, i will read more of your stuff- later, for now it is 11:02, and my mum is yelling at me, ja!

uh-huh, i really dont get it, but it was nice. confusing but i liked it, if only i could make sense of it tho.

T_T It was confusing at first, but then I got it.