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emo_deadweight
2008-07-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat story left me breathless! I have never ever read a story with that much power in every word... It was so inspiring to read such phenomenal work! I'm working on getting some ideas for a fic of my own, and Ive never read one that made me truly feel like I was sasuke! Thank you so much for making such a great one-shot. Please send me the link to any other storys you may have writen at . I could just look on your profile but Im reading this via cell phone and so I cant... XP
Heaven Cobra
2008-07-22
ch 1,
abuseThat was...absolutely amazing. Very well done!
runtus maximus
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abuseYour writing is very complex. That was beautiful.
Majestically Mystical
2007-11-04
ch 1,
abuseThis was beautiful.

The imagery, the stars, the characterization. The words. The concept.
TeasingShadows
2007-10-14
ch 1,
abusebeautiful, I always thought too many descriptive words would needlessly complicate and placate a good story, but this certainly proved me wrong. I guess the abstract and extremely poetic prose was the key. Still wow, pretty heart-wrenching there...my favorite kind of story, and conducted in such a masterful way. Kudos to you.
Mnesomeye
2007-05-04
ch 1,
abuseI didn't understand half of the language in this because well, I'm dunce, but this is one of the most beautiful sasunaru fanfics I've ever read in the history of mankind. EVER.

The only thing I'd say was to take out the breaks that you have in the story. I love the way it all meshes into one and you can't distinguish between reality and Sasuke's thoughts. That's what makes it as beautiful as it is. I nearly cried. No, correction, I am crying. If I've already reviewed this, forgive me for spamming... but thank you, thank you SO MUCH for such a moving piece. Sniffle. :3
I am the Unicorn
2006-06-25
ch 1,
abusethis was such a good story. great use of language and just... wow. i hope you don't mind the fav?
Mazoku-Princess
2006-03-15
ch 1,
abuseI honestly dont know what to say. Your writing style is so...mature and amazing. You had me hooked on reading this from the first word! Not many people can really write this well, and definately not here. I'm very impressed...and slightly jealous. How old are you and do you write original fiction as well? I'd love to read more of you work, truthfully. You're an amazing writer. Really. If someone says you suck, tell them they dont know what they're talking about and that you are truly amazing.

If you want to ignore me, go right ahead. I have no idea what I'm saying right now. (sickness sucks...)

Ja,
~Maz-hime
Master Elora Dannan
2006-03-11
ch 1,
abuseO_O ...

I bow to your genius. *flings herself into a kowtow* All give worship to the Master.
Daitai Otonashii Ookami
2006-03-07
ch 1,
abuseIt was sad, and melancholly, but it was bittersweet. I really liked it. It makes me sad, and happy, and then sad again.

--cj
Moth Gypsy
2005-12-17
ch 1,
abuse...holy. crap.

whenever i need inspiration, from now on i know where to go... you have inspired me.

dead serious, i cant explain how this has effected me... you are a briliant writer, truly amazing, this oneshot sketch, whatever, is written so poeticly i swear even if it never ended i would still be reading it, i will read more of your stuff- later, for now it is 11:02, and my mum is yelling at me, ja!
Hikari no Kurai
2005-12-17
ch 1,
abuseuh-huh, i really dont get it, but it was nice. confusing but i liked it, if only i could make sense of it tho.
Kyra Date
2005-12-09
ch 1,
abuseT_T It was confusing at first, but then I got it.
SasuNaru-Number-1-Fan
2005-11-07
ch 1,
abuseit was the best you did it on my favorite couple and it had passion
Kaina
2005-10-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseOne word: BRILLIANT. I absolutely loved it. Its beauty, its style...if this is your first one, it's definitely a stunning debut. Automatic favorite. I don't usually leave reviews, but this left me absolutely breathless.

Please write more.
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