That's how it ends?!

Oh, so that's what Jack did.

oh no, I'm now thinking this isn't going to end well.

I guess Katnappe has finally become careless. I never heard of that band or the music.

Emorions are complicated. I've noticed that Clay is the neutral one in the whole friendsship. Every story sems to have one, and usually, it is Clay.

Man, everything seems to be sprialing downward for Kimiko and Jack. Perfect!

I acn tell Omi and Rai are going to have another confrontation. I think this story is going good.

I' still trying ot get the deal with Katnappe. I'm definately loving this story very much. The use of wrods are great and I see hints of foreshadowing in the end of this chapter

I'm enjoying all this drama! But the only thigns closes to tree here are catie.
Finally, someone used the 'chemoelon-bot' in their stories! I have read many Nack/Kimiko fics and this is the first time it's been used.

At least Kimiko is learning s little of JAck. And what did Jack do to Katnappe??

ooh! Catnappe! That's soemthing I would do too! Great idea and detailed withe the whole 'believable' thing. :D

Rai loves Kimiko! I'm loving these chapters so far! The plot chickens!

And thus, the plot begins!!

This was such a wonderful story! Make laught a lot, I love Jack in here. Such a shame that he didn't get Kimiko, I think they do a sweet couple -at least in this fic. I feel sorry for him, he was a good guy for Kimiko. But I like Raimund too soo *shrug*
Oh well, I love this. You did great, girl ;)

See ya!!

lol.
i love how jack's getting kimiko to sign the papers while his robots are doing battle with the rest of the dragons.
awesome.