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Heeroneko
2008-03-27 . chapter 4
Nice fanfic...hehe X3 hope to see more of it XP I like how you have Zidane n Vivi set up XP
The Obsidian Angel
2007-01-10 . chapter 4
Lol I like Lani the fangirl. She reminds me of myself, al though Id be trying to get pictures of Zidane and Kuja rather than anyone else. I mean, dont get me wrong. I dont like incest pairings at all... but they're not really blood relatives... are they? ... Nice chap. I love the DDR parts. Kuja scares me sometimes... He's just too much woman for me. Lol. How did Ama come to be tangled up with all these strange people...
The Obsidian Angel
2007-01-10 . chapter 3
Zidane and Vivi?! Well, that's an interesting couple... And confusing I might add... on so many levels. I really liek this fic. Its hilarious and unpredictable. And the idea. Oh man. That's why real life is so important to fiction. You come up with ideas like this XD Very original. I love Zidane (I love Zidane in almost every story) and Ama. And I love how Zorn and Thorn are in college XD! Thats so hilarious. I like Kujaz as usual.Kuja is my favorite drama queen.
Bloodshy Testament
2006-09-21 . chapter 4
Splee, did I mention this story is awesome?
Loved the little KujaXAma bit in there, absofriggin'lutely. If you were to quit on this fic I'd... sniffle or pout or something un creative like that.
Antoher wonderful chapter all around! The ZiddyXVi fluff just keeps gettin' better and better. ^.^
Doctor Redbox
2006-09-08 . chapter 4
Ahh...Errand huh? Kinky...xD
Devilish Kurumi
2006-08-29 . chapter 4
Something about Fangirl!Lani just makes me squeal. Also, "Running errands, huh?" made me lol fo'realz. And Captain Jack is such an Amarant artist! I totally dug it and it's so not crappy. Welcome back, no matter how brief!
MiniMnMs
2005-12-24 . chapter 3
Wow, a drunk Vivi in 5 secs. Now I wonder what's going to happen next...please continue this fic as well as your other fics too!
Garnet-Crystals
2005-12-11 . chapter 3
I'm not sure if my other review got in, and if it did, I'm sorry for taking up space! Anywho, bring on the Vivi/Zidane, it's different so that's cool. You're a wonderful writer, and please update soon!
Bloodshy Testament
2005-12-11 . chapter 3
I dun't mind at all! Ijust don't reply to the replys, for some reason. O.o;
E! Vivi-sama's drunk... I'm sensing some good 'ol fashioned pairing here, am I? I muchly like the ZiddyXVivi fluff at the end... I await the next chappie!
Doctor Redbox
2005-12-08 . chapter 3
Drunk Vivi hmm? 'kay, I'll go along with it.
What was Kuja drinking?xD
O.o You started a Doujinshi!? Too bad I'm not going to were your going to sell it, you got any scans?
Devilish Kurumi
2005-12-08 . chapter 3
Bwahaha. Vivi/Lani interaction! I totally see her as a bartender, too. I dig this, man. And hiatus is okay, since I'm doing it with Deepest Blue. Woot for fics, though.
Bloodshy Testament
2005-11-25 . chapter 2
Surprixzingly, I really like this. It's written very well, and I'm kinda likin' the odd senerio. ^.^ And what is going on with Amarant and Ziddy? I may have to keep an eye on this one...
Doctor Redbox
2005-11-10 . chapter 2
Hehe...I like this, It's pretty amusing!xD
Is Kuja in love with Amarant? He keeps calling him Ama,(*_*Please say yes!!)
*adds to favorites and story alert*
Garnet-Crystals
2005-11-09 . chapter 2
Lovely chapter! I wonder though, is Vivi going to..."get" with anybody? Please update soon!
Devilish Kurumi
2005-11-09 . chapter 2
Pah, something in my last review probably did. Stupid website. I totally enjoy this fic and everything. Man, man oh man oh man, I love fics with Amarant in them. And Vivi. Especially Vivi. And Kuja. And Zidane. And I like how you make them interact and have them in character even though it's like AU and stuff.
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