Very POWERFUL and moving.

THIS IS WONDERFUL, AMAZING, BEAUTIFUL, PLEASE TELL ME THERE WILL BE A FOLLOW-UP TO THIS STORY THEY CAN'T DIED NOT WITH HER BEEN PREGNANT.

I WOULD LOVE TO WRITE THIS BAD.
THIS IS SO GOOD I CRIED ALL THE WAY TO THE END
VERY NICE WRITING.

THANK YOU VERY MUCH

aww that's so sad but very well written

Cry and weep. And weep and cry. Why did they have to die?

Nice job.

WHy? Why? Why? I'm off to cry...if this is what you wanted, then you got it! *sobbing*

Wow. This is powerful and haunting. I loved Wier's speech. Well written.

What do you mean that was pretty bad writing, that was brilliant. You had me on the verge of tears is was so good. Seriously, don't degrade yourself, that was really, really, really, really, really good. Keep them coming.

Oh my...A really good story...I almost cried...It was spectacular.