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| firefly09 2005-11-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseIt's a good story, chapters could be a bit longer. |
| the tribble master at schoo... 2005-11-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseAwsome! Uh why is Chloe talking to her cousin drunk? i really appreaciate the update! (do you think you could review to soaring?) thank you! WRITE ON! (= |
| SheLoves2Read 2005-10-30 ch 2, | abuseAh! please update |
| Teranika Meneldil 2005-10-26 ch 2, | abuseGood beginning. I'm interested to see where this story goes. Please keep updating. |
| AriesFireGirl1985 2005-10-25 ch 2, | abuseI love where you are going with this!I like that Lois has a thing for Clark...keep it up,you've got a fan right here! |
| Bramblerose4 2005-10-25 ch 2, | abuseO post more, post more. I want to know what Chloe tells Lois! |
| clois4life 2005-10-25 ch 2, | abusethis is great. i really like it. i want to see how it ends and make u dance. pleaz post more soon. |
| The Tribble Master 2005-10-24 ch 2, | abuse“How about a night of hot, steamy se-“ Oh, wait, scratch that. BEST LINE EVER! (= you and i are good at humor. hey have you ever read anything by sharon creech? has the same style you do. writes one book.. ex 'finding redbird' were the character says her best friend just left their home bybanks, and in another story, ex 'walk two moons' the charcter is sad she just left her bestfrined in bybanks. ya get it? i like how you connect. still an awsome job. WRITE ON! (= ...and now i ask for you to do the DISCO! soon i shall update and you can ask the same of me or you can just read my old stories...(shrugs and staggers off) = p |
| The Tribble Master 2005-10-24 ch 1, | abusealright- BALL ROOM DANCING! (= I like the way this started out. keep it up your style is excellant. WRITE ON! (= p.s. i did the macarena. and i made my cat do it too. (= LOL! |
| KentCharm 2005-10-24 ch 2, | abuseDance monker dance! lol jk. Hm the picture part was confusing. Lex and Clark pictures...intimate moments?? Serious?! :O |
| KentCharm 2005-10-24 ch 1, | abuseHah! good First chapter. Cute! |
| clois4life 2005-10-24 ch 1, | abusepleaz review.i really like the whole concept of the fanfic. iwould really like to read more. pleaz update soon. |
| SupernaturalGal6 2005-10-24 ch 1, | abuseoh, please update soon! |
| Leto81 2005-10-24 ch 1, | abuseSounds interesting. Can't wait to see where you're going with this. Update soon! |