Reviews for A Young Boy's Tale

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Yizuki 2008-03-01 ch 10,	abuseRyou has some sort of ability. I can just tell. Right?
yamiaainferno 2008-01-04 ch 10,	abusepoor ryo...
yamiaainferno 2008-01-04 ch 7,	abusekiaba is even scarier in this story than ever oot ryo altho i have a feeling the fact that bakura is evil won't go unchecked...
yamiaainferno 2008-01-04 ch 2,	abuseyour good at this stuff
Ryou VeRua 2006-04-01 ch 10,	abuseOo That's kinda weird...but yay. That makes Ryou special. Which makes me happy. ^^
straykitty 2006-02-11 ch 5,	abusegrowls SETO KAIBA YOU GET HERE THIS MINUTE!! Seto: What? Read! And apologise! Seto: reads Why should I apolo - WHACK! Seto: What the censored was THAT for? APOLOGISE, JERK-BOY! Seto: Now you just sound like Pegasus. growls Seto: Okay, whatever. I'm sorry. Happy now? Huh? Seto: YOU WEREN'T EVEN PAYING ATTENTION!?! Nope, what were you saying? Seto: growls and mutters to himself Heh heh heh... evil look Right, to the more serious part of the review! YAY! 1) watch out for punctuation... e.g. sometimes, after a sentence that ends with a "." you have Said instead of said. 2) growls at pharoh Okay, okay, i only said it would be MORE serious! Not ENTIRELY serious! 3) Very nishe plot. Melikes! 4) UPDATE! 5) I WILL finish reading this, but I have to go now... ciao!
Okami Youkai 2006-01-03 ch 1,	abuseShoot digitty Kiku, since when you become such a good writer? XD Man, I thought you learning how to draw anime like no tommorow was a miricle...but this...dang. It's been forever since I've been on my own FF account, hey look, it's even under my old 'rocky email' lol I may start doin' Fanfics again, maybe just one, I dunno, people don't like me here...or I might just go back to my fictionpress account and do Anthem (so ya can read it ^__^ )
acesgirl22 2005-12-06 ch 8,	abusei love your stories. you make them so interesting. you rock!
Ultraviolet Lemur 2005-11-29 ch 8,	abuseAw! Warm and fuzzy again! hands giant cookie wait a minute, Seto's coming back? NO! sets a doberman pinscher on him There! That should take care of it! You're gonna write more, right? Please? I want to see what comes next!
Ultraviolet Lemur 2005-11-29 ch 7,	abuseAw! He finally finds his names, and his brother! Now I feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I'm glad Seto is gone! sticks tongue out at seto
Ryou VeRua 2005-11-24 ch 8,	abuseNeh...blushes I'm not very far...I'm extremely slow...but anyways. Seto's coming back? NO! Oh, wait...coughs, falls onto knees There we go. NO! As I was saying...aw, poor Ryo...especially with that conversation...was he really talking about Seto? ACK! >_< I need to know!
Ryou VeRua 2005-11-19 ch 7,	abuseHAHAHAHAHAHA! sticks tongue out at Seto Take that! XP But is he really coming back again...? I'm so happy Bakura came! Kinda like Prince Charming, except big brother rescues little brother, and on a black horse instead of a white horse, and Snow White wasn't getting beaten with a wip...! ^_^; (That was random...) Update soon please!
Ultraviolet Lemur 2005-11-15 ch 6,	abuseYay! Diploma for me! Keep up the great work, I want to read the rest of the story. Oh, the suspense!
-'-Chocolate-Coated-Chocobo... 2005-11-14 ch 1,	abuseKewl. Hey, as long as I'm reading this, why don't you read and review God of the Damned? It's not cute, but it's not as bad as it sounds either.. just a thought. Oh! And this story? I love it! It's well written, and touching, and emotional, and descriptive. Very nice.
Ryou VeRua 2005-11-14 ch 6,	abuseexamines Diploma Hm...can I skip the rest of high school now...? I wonder...also, go boy go! I'm so glad he stood up to Seto! But now I'm afraid for him...Seto is scaring me O.o Anyways, update soon please!

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