Pharaohs don't live in pyramids,only dead pharaohs do.Pharaohs live in palaces.And how can you let the pharaoh do nothing when that bastard seto was hitting yugi?! This is the first time I've criticize on one of your chapters.I'm very sorry.:(

Good chapter.:)

You sure like to write depressing stories.I bet this story is going to be really good.Btw,great chapter.:)

I want more Kiku

Ryou has some sort of ability. I can just tell. Right?

poor ryo...

kiaba is even scarier in this story than ever oot ryo altho i have a feeling the fact that bakura is evil won't go unchecked...

your good at this stuff

Oo That's kinda weird...but yay. That makes Ryou special. Which makes me happy. ^^

*growls* SETO KAIBA YOU GET HERE THIS MINUTE!!

Seto: What?

Read! And apologise!

Seto: *reads* Why should I apolo -

WHACK!

Seto: What the *censored* was THAT for?

APOLOGISE, JERK-BOY!

Seto: Now you just sound like Pegasus.

*growls*

Seto: Okay, whatever. I'm sorry. Happy now?

Huh?

Seto: YOU WEREN'T EVEN PAYING ATTENTION!?!

Nope, what were you saying?

Seto: *growls and mutters to himself*

Heh heh heh... *evil look*

Right, to the more serious part of the review! YAY!

1) watch out for punctuation... e.g. sometimes, after a sentence that ends with a "." you have Said instead of said.
2) *growls at pharoh* Okay, okay, i only said it would be MORE serious! Not ENTIRELY serious!
3) Very nishe plot. Melikes!
4) UPDATE!
5) I WILL finish reading this, but I have to go now...

ciao!

Shoot digitty Kiku, since when you become such a good writer? XD Man, I thought you learning how to draw anime like no tommorow was a miricle...but this...dang.

It's been forever since I've been on my own FF account, hey look, it's even under my old 'rocky email' lol

I may start doin' Fanfics again, maybe just one, I dunno, people don't like me here...or I might just go back to my fictionpress account and do Anthem (so ya can read it ^__^ )

i love your stories. you make them so interesting. you rock!

Aw! Warm and fuzzy again! *hands giant cookie* wait a minute, Seto's coming back? NO! *sets a doberman pinscher on him* There! That should take care of it! You're gonna write more, right? Please? I want to see what comes next!

Aw! He finally finds his names, and his brother! Now I feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I'm glad Seto is gone! *sticks tongue out at seto*

Neh...*blushes* I'm not very far...I'm extremely slow...but anyways. Seto's coming back? NO! Oh, wait...*coughs, falls onto knees* There we go. NO! As I was saying...aw, poor Ryo...especially with that conversation...was he really talking about Seto? ACK! >_< I need to know!