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| JaganshiKenshin 2006-10-06 ch 4, | abuseInteresting premise... Kurama's one of my favorite fighters. |
| LoveAnime18 2006-07-28 ch 4, | abuseawesome-ness *goes to read sequel* |
| colormeinpretty 2005-12-28 ch 4, | abuseYay sequel! Thank God, you cant just leave me hanging like that! Kurama's gonna come see her agian, right?? |
| colormeinpretty 2005-12-28 ch 3, | abuseAww..this is sad...Kira died...lol you two DO look alot alike tho, like in that picture at your dads house, you know, the cartoon one haha. You two are so similar, but at the same times complete and utter oppisites. |
| colormeinpretty 2005-12-28 ch 2, | abuseVery deep...yes..very...I like this alot so far. |
| colormeinpretty 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abuseIt's cool how amy lee has that effect, ne? One question...why does Kurama always wear a blouse? Wny not a t-shirt...or a sweater vest lol |
| Aikky 2005-11-15 ch 4, anon. | abuseWonderful way to end it. I can't wait to get to the Sequel. I'll be lookin' for it. ^__~ |
| MidnightxBluexBlack 2005-11-14 ch 4, | abuseOdd sort of endings...Far too many loose ends in my opinion, but if you say that there will be a sequal, then that's cool, so long as everything is resolved in the end. Good story. |
| MidnightAbyss 2005-11-13 ch 4, | abuseAlright! A sequel! Woah, deja vu. I wrote that once already today. Everyone's making sequels while I'm still just beginning all of my stories. Well, beautiful as always. Sorry if I don't sound enthusiastic, I went searching for fossils today and now I'm exhausted. Can't wait to see the sequel. I'll remember to look for it. Auf Weidersen! |
| Kajihenge Yoko 2005-11-13 ch 4, | abuseThis is really great! I can't wait for that sequel! |
| neko kitkat 2005-11-13 ch 3, anon. | abuseyay you updated! Yippee! pleaz update soon! ^_^ |
| MidnightAbyss 2005-11-08 ch 3, | abuseWonderful. Please continue. I know this is a short review. But words simply cannot describe, plus I'm really tired. |
| Aikky 2005-11-03 ch 3, | abuseSweet ending for the third chapter. Its a positive out look to life more people need to see. Heh. Its a pitty a lot still don't though. I look forward to futur chapters! |
| Aikky 2005-11-03 ch 2, | abuseJust as good as the first. I'm still totally in love with your writing style. Just wonderful. Heh. Also I would like to make mention of the new character just introduced named Katelyn. She's a character that I think everyone can love in what ever story line they appear. A kind, trusting person. Heh. Wonderful job thus far! |
| Aikky 2005-11-03 ch 1, | abuseWonderful writing! I was totally into the story from your first sentance. The description was simple yet painted a picture in your mind plus you could really get into what Kurama was really feeling and thinking. Poor Kitsune. But anyways, wonderful story thus far. |