What? Just one? Anyways I love reading from Kenshin's percpective, and what went on previous to him intergrating into the school as well.

hi u said to ask for scenes u d like well i d luv it if we got inside kenshins head during the encounters he has with kaoru in highschool especially the bit wen she's with misao in the courtyard and they're making eyes at each other. oh i wud luv that! thanx

Love this idea. To be honest with you I wouldn't complain if you told the entire story again just in Kenshin's POV, but I imagine that might be asking a bit much... :P Anyway, brilliant, love it, write more!

This is great - it's really nice to see the highschool part of it all from Kenshin's POV, so some more of that would be nice. Also Kenshin's POV on seeing Saitou as Kaoru's teacher or Saitou's POV on that xD

O, pretty one-shot. Could you do the time when Kaoru bumps into Kenshin from his perspective? Please?

more? please?

lol. Yes, I caught that left-handed thing. "I know something that you don't... I'm not left-handed, either."

Oh...yay! A recent story! I like, and are you going to make more stories from this? If you are going to make some more one-shots, I could suggest some ideas.
~Aly

And I am Happy to read this, of course which has your wonderful writing and Frozen Moonlight related.

~Mayotteru Hoshi

Are you going to updtae this story anytime soon? I think it would be a good idea to put the story Frozen Moonlight (or at least some of it) from Kenshin's point of view. That would be great!

hehe...Kenshin mighta been bored but i don't think he planned on getting killed...hehe...it's kinds funny when u think about it...awaiting update...tata!

Kenshin's attitude here reminded me of Clooney's character in Intolerable Cruelty. That part when he's just standing on the tennis court complaining about how he has no challenges, while he idly swings at the tennis balls. I could see this Kenshin doing that too!

I liked seeing Kenshin's side of that incident, his ennui about the whole thing. It does make a sharp contrast to his attitude when he's 'stalking' Kaoru on that fateful night.

I like this, it's a different angle, and the writing is excellent!

I like ths idea, especially since I'm all for your brain producing the next chapter of Frozen Moonlight. Can't wait for more! Especially a chapter from Kenshin's point of view when he sees Kaoru "not noticing" him. Or growling at him in the hallway. Or getting the better of him at fighting. Did I mention that I LOVE the fact that Kaoru beat him? Everyone else makes her whiny and wimpy, but you keep her strong and true to character.

i was rather dissapointed that it was so short. You normally write really long chapter.

The idea of a one shot was a good idea i thought. giving more insight to 'Frozen Moonlight'.

So update ya!