i didn't get it...

wow. i am absolutely blown away. this was amazing, breath-taking even. wow. just wow.

The abstract feeling in this really makes it powerful for each character. Kudos!
-Hannah

This one hurts - it hurts so good. Thank you. The emotions are so true and so real. Thank you. Here's to humanity.

Beautifully written.

The only things that have got my mind running in circles to figure out are the section breaks at the beginning. "h," "a," "r," "j," and "l"? I think I'm way off in my guess, but House, Allison, Robert, James, and Lisa? Ha, it really doesn't fit well, what with the switch between last and first names, but it's the only thing my befuddled brain has come up with thus far. Feel free to e-mail me because I am entirely clueless. ^^

Thanks for a great read.

-C-

Very nice look at these characters. i would have liked to see Eric in there but I guess we haven't been given much to work with for him.

I loved this. I didn't exactly understand it but it was very poetic and I thought it was professional. I still liked it, I don't know why, but I did. You are incredibly talented.

You must be sick and tired of hearing this, but you're a very talented, young (maybe that's why you don't mention your age in your profile) writer and I admire your work. This is definitely lovely. I love those little, revealing sentences you write about the characters and I adore your tone. The line there's water in oxygen is very deep. I can understand that, and I love the idea of rain falling in the fic.
I loathe Cameron sometimes but I liked her in this fic. How Cameron of her to pick up that fly, poor her.
Once again, good job.

OMG... i just read my review for 'fall', and no way are you 14! maybe you're 15 now, but... that's my age!! damn, i am so jealous! not really, i'm not the jealous type. instead i will now aim to get as good as you. i won't ever be better, coz you have such a huge headstart and will probably rival shakespeare by the time i get as good as you are now. ok, i'm gonna stop with the flattery and read some more of your stuff.

*kicks self for not reviewing this fic before*

ATTENTION REVIEWERS: Never write long reviews. They will get cut down to a couple of sentences and the author will never see what you took the time to write. Thank you.

I'm always so hesitant to review anything of yours because I know I can never do any of it justice. My favorite parts were Chase with the telephone, the dying man in pain, and Cuddy's need for perfection.

Very sad. Very beautiful. I loved it. Absolutely loved it. You have a strong knack for word choice and images. Very, very wonderful. Keep writing!

I really like this, how you punctuate somewhat abstract ideas with very clear, vivid images. Many lines struck me, but the one I remember is about Chase being compared to House, not his father. Thank you very much.

I have nothing to criticize.

The story was excellent, without the usual angsty "character hates life/world/etc." going on. I got this as a recommendation, and I have to say, I enjoyed reading it. A lot.

Hm... I have a week's suspension for an unknown reason, so I have to find fan fictions that will ease the loss of posting. Reading this was like taking a Vicodin... sorry for the House comparison, but I can't think of much else.

Erm... I think that's it. Thanks.

HAPPY TURKEY DAY!

:o)-- "I stole this quote from somebody."

Wonderful, nicely written
so true
p.s totally agree about MASH (cry and laugh- not in public, 14 yr olds aren't meant to watch MASH!)