| Reviews for An Off Course Bet |
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lilyevans1998 3/24/13 . chapter 2 haha i really like it so far i can't stop reading it when i need to study:P you know lol |
3rd Bookworm 10/13/12 . chapter 15A good story a bit OOC but good. |
fighting-john-watsons-war 9/2/12 . chapter 15They're so awkwardly adorable together, I love this :3 |
aweee 6/28/11 . chapter 15 This is sooooo cute! I loved how it ends, ;D me gusta. You liked the whole story, it's so cute. |
muz 12/20/10 . chapter 15 wait? here's the part where L & J get together? |
sti 4/7/10 . chapter 15Aw. That was so cute. I love James POV) |
MULAN-IFUWEREGAY 7/3/08 . chapter 15update soon |
R E Z I A 6/30/08 . chapter 15Sorry..but at first,i was confused about the ending,because i didnt know that they ,also...i liked it!it was sweet!but i do wish you added more detail to it..especially their kisses! w |
R E Z I A 6/30/08 . chapter 14WHAT THE HELL?James' poem made even me embarassed for him!I feel so bad for him! T_T Poor James! T_T |
R E Z I A 6/29/08 . chapter 7Argh!Spelling errors!Bugs the poo outta me. ;] When will he get the courage to ask Lily!I like them..as a 're so cute! |
p 4/25/08 . chapter 8 candy makes the world go round, like the story. |
Can't fight the moonlight 4/2/08 . chapter 15I loved it! :D Well, to be honest, I really REALLY LOVED it! ;D It's one of the best fics I've ever read, it was so cute and funny and... I can go on with this list forever so I better stop there xD I really like the way you wrote this one, hearing James's thoughts and all, it seemed so real, it really sounded like him... well, I don't know what he's like, but that's how I imagine him x) Anyways, back to my review.. it was so funny to read his thoughts, I don't know how many times I laughed and grinned like an idiot xD This fic was in other words adorable! ;) |
Princess Gillybean 3/22/08 . chapter 15aw James was just the right mix of arrogance and awkardness. it was an awesome story. |
Jaliy 1/25/08 . chapter 15Great story! Really liked your Lily and James. Quite hilarious, good job! |
I.Pop.Rocks 7/20/07 . chapter 15nonono! i didn't want it to be over! Thisstory was so good, and I really liked the way youy portrayed James :) |