OH MY GOSH. I CRIED. I FREAKING CRIED! THE PART WITH THE PAINTING AND AKFJVNJVNADLKNVADKVNAVADVNAD FEELS. I've always imagined that Sasuke and Sakura would have three kids. Hahaha! And this is just avndjndlkjndlkjnsdlkjn. Feels.

I like how it's written. I don't think there were any errors (and if there were I must have overlooked them). I like how you put the flashbacks and how much they complemented the whole story. :)

So, yeah. I really like this.

love from,
renzie17

This made me cry, and I'm a little more than upset that Sasuke died, even though I knew that he would succumb eventually. And that painting that the children gave... oh I just want to hug all of them. And I can't help but feel that the eldest daughter resembles Itachi in a way.

WOW. Just...WOW. It's BEAUTIFUL. It's so deep and meaningful and...I can't describe it. It's truly a masterpiece. Tugs the heart and amazes the mind. Congrats. :)

this was absolutely fantastic. loved it.

I liked it alot

This story is so utterly breathtaking. I adore it. I love the characterization, the length, the attention to detail. I love these little Uchiha children that you've portrayed so beautifully. It's universe that is very plausible and almost preferable. Even though I normally detest stories that have Sasuke die, you did it so masterfully that it only enhanced your incredible fic rather than detract. Thanks for writing this!

I loved it :'D

soo sad, but so good!

GREAT one-shot!

LOVED it!

i am speechless...i really have no idea as to what to say! it was eerily good i trust u understand what i mean.

This is just...amazing. Your OC's are perfect and the writing is flawless, as is the characerterization. All I can really manage to say is thank you very, very much for writing it.

I cried. I so frigging cried.

Then I re-read.

And wailed.

So wailed.

Amazing. Just and full of emotion...I'm not a SasuSaku fan but this...THIS is my new fav...A work of art.

you pretty much broke my heart.

and goodness. this was excellent written and so good. it hurt. and gah. why did i have to start crying?

but it ws so good and heartfelt and just so close to one. i'm not one to get sensitive, but this was amazing. thanks so much for it.

thank you.

Wow, this was amazing. So, so beautiful...

So, you have a really really great summary. I was hesitant to read the fic, my phase of SasuSaku shipping has long passed, but tht summary made me extremely curious as to the type of fic this was. That and something about the way the text lays on the paper (err, computer screen) just drew me in.

It's an intriguing mix of many things. The tone for one thing varies; the past with its lighter tones still has the underlying somber tone of the present verses. It's rather wrenching that in the end Kakashi is the only one left. Splitting the chapters by the birth of the children was an interesting way of telling the story

...there's a certain "je ne sais quoi" about this that I cannot put name to. But it's exemplary and lingers in my mind still. Wonderful work.