LOL nice

Daxters' subconcious is a scary place...

HAhahahahahahahahaha! Awsome story!

*wipes tear from eye* hee hee, good story, very funny. I love the end. So Dax is afraid of Ice cream men? But they sell you ice cream...and then try to run you over. Good story!

Man, that was screwed up. I loved it! More! Please?

This was so much fun to read at 7am before class. From the first few paragraphs I was giggling (quietly, so as not the awaken roommate). Thanks for the laugh!

And, Torn raised a good point. So what Daxter was turned back? A lot of authors do that simply to force the characters into a citrus scene. I haven't seen anyone write exactly what Torn said. Woot.

Hahaha! Funny. A little odd, but funny none-the-less!
Oh, and just for the record, Jak X is quite fun.

Even though I didn't get a lot of it, it still seemed silly and funny.

Thanks a bunch for letting me beta-read, even if you didn't have much that needed correcting. It's always nice being able to be helpful and appreciated. -huggles-

I hope this is just a start to you writing more often, Blu.

Oh my goodness. By all that is good and sacred in this sad little world of ours...

... that was utterly hilarious. Genius. The clowns topped it all off (though I do happen to fear them). Not too chaotic, not too dull. Just pure random. Genius, my friend, genius.

I wouldn't mind seeing more of your comedic work. That was good. ;p

~Zudin

Just...wow. I love those lines. Pity I couldn't review during eighth hour...XP

Poor Dax. His torture brings a smile to everyone's face ... XD Fun stuff, fun stuff :)

It was very good! ^__^ *still laughing* . Clowns? What an awful nightmare... poor Dax !

Bravo!

very good. Even though I know very little about the characters I enjoyed this fanfiction.