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| AlexCurtis 2007-02-18 ch 1,  | abuseAwsome keep it up |
| Shika.Tot 2006-09-11 ch 15, | abuseFair story. I liked reading your story. |
| thebondgirl 2006-02-17 ch 15, | abusehehe! what a fun story!:) really liked it - keep it up!:):) |
| Queen of the Red Skittle 2006-01-18 ch 15, | abuseThat was a beautifully, cleverlly, and deeply written story. You had the characters' traits nailed down and added complex twits of your own. Wonderful conflict with Grissom and Nick. You made it seem so real with the right amount of dialog, imagery (*wailing* What happened to my ability to write?!) and flow. Excellently done. Great stuff, great stuff. *chuckle* I really like the very end with Grissom and Nick. Good work. QOTRS~*~ |
| rozzy07 2006-01-04 ch 15, | abuseSorry for the late review but just have to add my pennies worth in praising this fine story. Great stuff, truly a rollercoaster ride of excitement all the way. The ending, Grissom subtle to the end, was just perfect! Thank you. |
| Vegela 2005-12-21 ch 15, | abusewow...it's over...darnit, ah well...great story! |
| iboneki 2005-12-21 ch 15, | abuseGreat job, Nicol! I really enjoyed your story and I eagerly await your next one. Have a nice Christmas :) |
| nancy 2005-12-20 ch 15, anon. | abuseGreat story, loved every minute of it. Can not wait for your next one |
| JoyBean 2005-12-20 ch 15, | abuseA wonderful story! I loved reading it. |
| MJ 2005-12-20 ch 15, anon. | abuseVery good story. You have the Nick character down well, hope you are planning to write more about him. The interactions between the team was on the spot. I look forward to your next story. |
| everybetty 2005-12-20 ch 15, | abuse- liked this line „I mean it, Nick,“ Grissom spoke, serious again. „If you want to play hero, go to the cops. We are scientists. We study evidence, and show it in the courts. That´s all. If you are looking for some excitement...“ very Grissom-esque :) and cute part about sending Nick into the sewers as punishment - i know u are in Europe and may not have seen the S5 Season Finale - no way would Grissom send Nick into the sewers after that ! :) |
| sherryw 2005-12-20 ch 15, | abuseThanks for a great story. It was very suspenseful and well written. I'm looking forward to your next story. I hope you have a safe and Happy Holiday...Take care! |
| Mma63 2005-12-20 ch 15, | abuseNicol, it was a perfect ending for an amazing story! Loved the argument/dialogue between Nick and Grissom in the ambulance (the way theirs emotions and concerns came out in words...), the interogatory room scene brought the needed informations to better understand the case and the "punishment" at the end. The whole story and characters were very trully, very similar to the TV show. It was an enjoyable reading and I'm glad to know you have more ideas for a new story. Come back soon!(I added you to my Author alert list) Best wishes and very happy holidays! |
| wraiths-angel 2005-12-20 ch 15, | abuseVery ood ending, enjoyed this story a lot |
| JoyBean 2005-12-18 ch 14, | abuseAwesome chapter! Can't wait for the resolution. |