uwaahhh i love your story! but some parts are confusing... like when shinou and murata where drinking by the piano.. talking about wolfram being shinou... and then at the very end about that body laying dormant etc.. and what was wolfram's contract? does it have anything to do with the body and why they need to wait for that certain time (4 years etc etc etc)? would you mind explaining?

I think I've fallen in love with the way you write Murata. He's so fantastically EEEvil. Love him!

nice

Wah! I don't understand the last part! it's shinou? or wolfram? Cause when Yozak says, "wolfram?" Murata nodded! explain! please!

Sorry, that was my twin reviwing earlier. She has an annoyinh tendency to use my account. The story's really good, but it's confusing. Why do they have to wait four years, five months, three weeks and one day? What are they waiting for, exactly?

This story was written very well and is interesting. But well, I couldn't get all the time uld you explain it please. Sorry and all...

whoa, this story is amazing! I absolutely love the whole wolfram/Shinou idea, I thought it was genius!

lol, Yuuri and his buggy dance _

Fantastic story! *goes off to read the sequel*

"Operation: Bitch Slap of Justice"? Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha

OMG! THIS IS STARTING TO LOOK LIKE WHAT HAPPENED TO SAKURA-HIME IN TSUBASA RESERVOIR CHRONICLES! (squeals VERY, VERY LOUD)

OK Im a bit confused with the story...

But that was a GREAT storyline...

Wolfram being Shinou or

was it Shinou being Wolfram 'PART'

was the biggest 'HEADACHE OF ALL!'

GREAT JOB THOUGH!

Hello. I have recently read your story. I have been looking for a good Kyo Kara Maoh story, and it is very hard to find a good one. "Forgotten" is a wonderful piece. You are very good at writing and I hope you shall continue!XD

Oh...kay.

Very well done. While there are issues in places, the storyline completely absorbed the reader.

EXCELLENT story. I am off to read the rest of it now. D

Oh dear.

What a wonderful fic, but I'm afraid I'm still a trifle confused (as seems to be the general consensus). Is it Wolfram or Shinou who Yuuri proposes to at the end? Methinks it's Shinou. Which would mean, Wolfram would be waiting in Shinou's body in suspended animation.

But they are maybe almost the same person (except, even so not really and if I were Yuuri I would still feel strangely betrayed).

But generally wonderful fic, well-told and with an inventive premise. I just wish you'd clarified these things a little more at the end.

I'm confused. It was good, but still, I'm confused.

W-Woah. That's a surprising ending. So you're planning to write a sequel? :D :D :D

I'd be happy to read it! _ Of course... *mutters* I don't care much for mpreg, but if you manage to make it believable and not overly done like others have - I could bear it. ;