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Ranmaleopard 10/16/11 . chapter 2
well at least this way ranma knows when he calls akane, gorilla, he knows it to be true!
brindani 2/24/07 . chapter 2
Hilarious, its the best description for this little piece. I'm very glad I stumble upon this little gem. I haven't laughed this much in awhile. Hopefully poor hungry Kasumi doesn't have to stay in Ranma's room too much longer. That wouldn't be nice. I do hope it is continued, but seeing as it is already 6 years old, I'll assume it is long buried. If it ever does make a recovery, I'll be most happy.

Thanks for the extra hearty laugh,

brindani
dogbertcarroll 10/11/06 . chapter 2
Great story, but I could swear I've seen a longer version somewhere.
Talantus 7/7/06 . chapter 2
ho switching roles are we?

has ranma became more powerfull than he is? or the same level as when the serie began? in any case, akane sure is a gorilla now hahaha!

dark devious elves is good for nabiki.

but what about kasumi? i'm figuring u-chan would be ucchan if she became akane's rival like ryoga was to ranma. unless...

anyway, i'm sticking to that story and am eagerly waiting for the next chapter! ;)
Gundum M 4/15/06 . chapter 2
mihoshi in charge of the universe? scary. I like to see nadoka punching genma in the next chapter. good fic.
TerraEpon 11/21/03 . chapter 2
I usually am not reviewing these old fics, but I'm making an exception since I can see you're still writing...so why in god's name has this one never been updated? It's easily my favorite of yours.

Of course, with utter idiots like 'Friend', I can see why you might be reluctant...

-Joshua
Drednax 7/13/02 . chapter 2
This one would have to be my favorite of everything you've written. I love AU stories where the characters are really messed up. Specifically when they deal with a change at the start of the Manga. Hope you continue this sometime in the future.
ghost 3/2/02 . chapter 2
you know this could be good if you restarted to write it agian if you are wirteing it then go on this is great
Iczelprime 11/15/01 . chapter 2
ROTFLMAO! Ohh, that's good stuff. Nabiki in Spring of Drowned Drow Sorceress, Akane in Spring of Drowned Gorilla, and Kasumi in Spring of Drowned Dwarf Rabbit? Not to mention the usual Genma curse. Hope to see more of this - I wanna know how bad Genma was pummelled!
KrNxNiGgA 9/18/01 . chapter 1
haha...i hope nodoka smacks akane silly everytime she hits RANMA...and if she tries to blame ranma for being a pervert i hope Nodoka straightens her out...with a 10000 ton mallet...*BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAaha...cough cough...wheez...* ok so im not used to evil laughter...well as you can tell i hate akane...i mean what sane person doesnt..? in my opinion any one who thinks shes right for Ranma is one step ABOVE KUNO...not below...ABOVE...

ja ne
neko-chama 9/10/01 . chapter 2
oh the irony. Akane truely deserves that. I commend you on your story and would love to see more of it.
Booksavvey 6/6/01 . chapter 2
This is as wonderful as all your other fics, but, and this is a big but, YOU NEVER EVER EVER FINISH THEM AND IT IS REALLY PISSING ME OFF!
Melfice79 5/25/01 . chapter 1
hey love this story, hope it becomes a ranma/kasumi fic. I think akane should get a few more beatings too, since she's just a that doesn't matter
Incurable Romantic 5/19/01 . chapter 2
I like the fact that you didn't fall back on the often used curse form of the man, this is much more interesting. I am just a little upset that this seems to be a Nabiki/Ranma fic, I am totally a Ranma/Akane person, but to each their own.
Sky 4/30/01 . chapter 2
Oh, good, another one :) I liked this story when I read the first one, and am quite glad that you decided to continue it, as its quite amusing. Please continue with it :)
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