Nice Story!

interesting

can't wait for more

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I Love Thethe second half of the original verson Plz Plz Update IT Soon!

I Love The first half of the entire original version!

more.

I have just one thing to say: PLEASE continue this!

And the rewrite is immensely superior to the original, do continue from there... please? Pretty please with sugar on top?

the original version, i faind it better than the rewrite your doing so could you not rewrite it please

never read the first version, but i like your story. (dring your 6 months are expired!) please update. i wana know what happen next. where is the snake? will usagi talk to her mother and hotaru (after all she was her bestfriend)? is lindsey a vampyre?

*sniff that is so sad, now please you have probably already started working on the next part but please update soon anyways. I really want to read more.

She shook her head. “I can’t hide inside my whole life. I’ll have to get used to the sun eventually"
It wouldn't work. I've tried it. I'm so friggin pale that I burn if i'm outside for over an hour, i get dreadful headaches from the sun, and when I do go out into the sun i have to wear pants, preferably long sleeves, a hat, and sunglasses ALONG with sunscreen so I would not get so dreadfully sick. NOT FUN.
Besides the fact of so many people asking me if i'm anemic being pale is REALLY annoying. (ironically enough I had dark brown hair... but somehow it turned to brown with copper red streaks. without hairdye...)

de don' know hogwarts vewy well do de? hehehehehe

I have to read this... I read the summary and i wanna know how this one is going to work out. I generally disaprove of HP crossovers but sometimes they work... (did you ever see the HP-SPONGE BOB crossover? *vomits*)

As much As I like this, it just gets so confusing through here. I'm not one to read over things I've already registered and deciphered, so I'm just going to ignore this. I did, however, try to find the chapter 8 (Broken hearts) And I found that whatever writing in there was completely diffrent from what was in the revised version. I really think you should remove this, because what's the point of rereading an old version that differs from the revised version?
I hope you get a revised version of chapter nine up soon.

Cyan- You are a good writer and as it is I know EXACTLY what you are talking about. Sometimes you just can't write & I will be waiting for you to get back into action and have inspiration to write. And when you do, I'm sure that I and lots of other people will be waiting for you to update. So don't feel bad, instead just find a way to get yourself some good writng done. _ Cuz if you ask me. I think that more chapters are the best apology you could give your fans & readers.

-Palkitty _