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Reviews For: On One of Summer's Afternoons

cae-prince
2005-11-01
ch 1,
abuseDid u know that I had a lump in my throat when I finished reading it?!! Its just how beautiful the fic is! Mac and Stella - they can make you cry or they can make you laugh til tears run down your cheeks, either way your vision will be blurred, LOL! Amazing work! Keep em' coming!
jd burns
2005-10-28
ch 1,
abuseLol. You had me worried there. I thought this was going to be a character death fic.

Nicely done.
Tinker Bell 05
2005-10-25
ch 1,
abuseI love your story- The imagery is awesome and I can totally picture this. So beautiful and breath-taking
StarrySkies
2005-10-24
ch 1,
abuse*sigh* Just beautiful. :) I love that line: "I heard that you flew away from me." Another brilliant piece.
saulalovin
2005-10-24
ch 1,
abuseWow, I totally loved that. It was so beautiful. :) So does this mean you're back? ;)
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