Ahh! You are an old hat! How else would you know oc Candy Southern, last seen in UXM 306. Kudos!

hey! finish this! it was getting good.

hello..that sounds good so far. are you gonna continue it?

pleasemake more cahpters

That sounds cool man! Yer ol' pal, The Bud.

great, but i need more. you can't just leave me hanging!

Yes, it would make more sense to review this when more is added to it, but let me remind you that YOU wanted me to review it now, so... Anyways, I love it so far. I like how you write about all the characters that I like. It shows good taste. ;) Anyways, it sucks that Scott's not "in" this story, but I'm sure it'll be great anyways.

I thought it was really good and if you have read any of my other reviews don't think that I say that about every oen you are wrong b/c yours is well written and should most definitely continued.

-oni komodo

Hmm. I liked it. Of course, I have NO idea what X-Men: Revolution is. Heh. I stopped reading when they ended Gen X and X-Man. DAMN YOU, MARVEL! Oh. But I liked it.

Awe, poor Jean. Please write a sequel, perhaps bringing Scott back?