That one's a thinker. Really deep and meaningful. I liked it. A lot. And Ichigo and Rukia would do that, you know? Jeez, you sound like Tite Kubo learned English and the art of fanfiction. Good job, here, human! Keep writing!

Lovely, in a very IchiRuki-ish unlovely sort of way.

Aww... That was just... I don't know what else to say except "pretty damn good".

Cuteness! Loved it. Great characterisation and it was so touching :)

GN

Wow...this is a really great story. I'm one of those who didn't know about the reference, but I'm going to check out the book. Neat little concept you have going here and I love the interaction between these two, it seems so natural.

Great work.

Lovely. Simply Lovely. Beautiful imagery, and you managed to make it sweet while keeping with their character. Very much a favorite and going on my list as such. Thank you so much for writing this. Keep writing!

GOD!
You kill me with your IchigoRukia.
Why can't there be more of this in the world!?

cute. I'm not that far reading Bleach, (only on volume 4) but I'm already an Ichigo/Rukia fan.

Ah, another beautiful story. Your style really brings these two to life, I love the amount of realism you are able to breathe into them. It's the little things like the chipped mug and the creaking floorboards, I think, that make your work so real to me. Wonderful job, you are swiftly becoming one of my favorite Bleach writers.

very cute,i hace liked it a lot ^_^

Ah, absolutely wonderful! ^^ I seriously loved this one-shot!

Wow, I really like your fic, it's not ooc and really descriptively written. I like that 'hole in the rain' idea and the metaphors used. You should write more bleach fics ^^

Very nice. :) YOU ARE TEH PWNZ0RZ!

love ur story. ^^ keep up de good work. (X

ish heart. X3