aw that was so cute!

Aww that was so good, it was really well written, i can actually see that in my head.

very cute. sad, but i liked it.

Very interesting spin on the Lily/James relationship. I loved how the last final line seemed more like a beginning than an end. Excellent job!

i really liked this, it's a bit out of the ordinary.

have a great 2006

Aw!

aw...that was a bittersweet but lovely story

wow that was an amazing story. really sad and sweet and i realy liked it. could you possibly add a sequel or something. the end was sort of incomplete.. that story was really moving, i could, like, feel her pain. xoxo

Broken-hearted Romantic scale: 9!
It almost made me cry, really. I know, I suck at the oneshots.

no you cant stop now, not now! its so sad. oh just one more chapter to tell us what happened. bo hoo.

I admit it.
I cried...But I'm glad I did.
It is definitely something one should cry about.
Lovely.

lovely.

That was an outstandingly brilliant new Point Of View! I have never ever read any stories that had a Point of View like yours, where James betrays (is that the correct word?) for someone eles, like Sophie in this case... and it was never Lily who wanted him back...

Bravo! Encore!
It would be awesome if you continued it, but it would also be VERY complete already so the reader would always be guessing at the ending. A Very Nice Job!

Your Fan Forever,
Sunny

Sad, but good.

GASP! How sad!

If I didn't know that they eventually have to conceive Harry, I might be a bit ticked at you. But that's just because I'm a hopeless romantic who wants eternal happy endings.

Great job, you!