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| Cristalake 2008-07-15 ch 13,  | abuseMORE! moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoreMORE! Must... Have... Next... CHAPTER! |
| Cristalake 2008-07-15 ch 2, | abusebullshit?bullshit! What bullshit! That was GREAT! The MOST realistic Kyuubi-is-nice plot I've ever seen. You actually gove a PLAUSIBLE reason! This is definately NOT crap! It';s like the anti-crap! |
| superninjamonkey 2008-06-29 ch 13, | abuseInteresting. |
| BeLuke 2008-06-22 ch 13, | abusei like this story although hping for updates? BeLuke |
| Guardian Dimension 2008-05-31 ch 13, | abuseI really like this - it is very, very good and I look forward to reading more. :) |
| avalokannon 2008-05-27 ch 13, | abuseNaruto's farewell to his apartment was touching. You somehow managed fill the air with wistfulness, along with the sad realization that he never had much of anything. It really struck a chord in me. Well done. |
| Hebi R. 2008-04-27 ch 13, | abuseReally hoping for more of this fic in the near-ish future. Please? Pretty please? Pretty please with miso ramen with extra naruto and menma and possibly some chilli oil for extra spice?!! |
| yasminkov 2008-04-14 ch 13, | abuseinteresting...looking forward to where you take this keep up the good work |
| Laegdin 2008-04-13 ch 13, | abuseI'm enjoying your story, especially the relationship you're creating between Naruto and Kyuubi. I also liked the way in which Naruto had a few doubts about whether having such a friendship with a demon is a good idea. Haha. I thought Kyuubi's rant(?) about Sasuke seemed a little OC for the Kyuubi you've written so far, although I had to laugh at his last line. ^_^ Ramen and "not-quite-rotten orange"s aside, it is bound to be interesting when the two (three) of them become roommates. Good luck with your writing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
| Raptor2001 2008-04-10 ch 13, | abuseuhh?? Saskue and Naruto will be roomate ... mean lot of rival mean good thing for them .. develop training faster than clan training or student adcmedy ... |
| Raptor2001 2008-04-10 ch 8, | abusethat is funny kYuubi is parent for naruto... |
| Raptor2001 2008-04-10 ch 7, | abuseit is very intersting .. Naruto got train by Kybuui ... i wonder Shikawill get chouji and Naruto eat ramen contest .. |
| Raptor2001 2008-04-09 ch 2, | abusei can't imagine about Kybuui change small cat ... poor Pride of Kyuubi that is very intesting ... |
| Gmasangel 2008-04-07 ch 13, | abuseCool cool! Keep it up! |
| Shashuko the Paisley Maiden 2008-04-07 ch 13, | abuseOMG Sasuke and Naruto are living together o.o this could get very bad, very fast... |