It is nice, but you better do something to help harry and his allies...because i would hate to see more die. and it needs more characters and more words.

That was hard. Poor People. They're all gonna die, aren't they?
Harry has to get much better in fighting, or he'll suck. Hope, the Order members are alright. As alright as possible, though.
Update soon.

yours
laragirl

Tonks to the rescue! Although... you'd think that the Order would send more people *because* they thought there might be an attack on Harry... Unless they have somehow given up on the thought that Harry was the wizarding world's savior? Haha, of course that's not it. What was *I* thinking? Haha. Yeah, I think Harry needs to get to the Burrow asap, before those vamps decide they want Harry to party with them. Good chapter, dear. Post more soon!

Great story so far! I'm impressed with your writing. Although your other stories do not give me cause to be optimistic, the writing here is amazing!@

This attack comes too early! Far too early! Harry isn't good enough yet to fight. He has to train much more than he had done until now.
What attacked Privet Drive? Trolls? Death Eaters? Werewolfs?
Go on writing so I'll know.

yours
laragirl

Ok, wow. Action from the get-go! I like that. Your writing style is quite wonderful, and I'm much intrigued so far. Just one thing: your chapters are so short! But they're effective, so I guess it's a good tradeoff. Post more soon soon soon!!

Oh...that sent chills down my spine. Another good one. Keep it coming, although I would suggest making the chapters a bit longer. Cheers.

Sounds interesting. Couldn't say much at this point.
Go on writing and you sure get reviews from me.
Update soon!

yours
laragirl

Another great chapter. I think it's a bit unrealistic that Harry would have been left alone and the Order wouldn't have come to check on him when he didn't write, but that's my only criticism. Keep going.

Wow. I'm blown away by the raw warfare that you described, especially that it's being shown among the Muggles. A great start. Please keep writing.