A haunting what-if of the fates of the people who dwelled Middle-Earth.

Oh, that hurt to read! It was wonderful story nonetheless, and extremely well written. The imagery was incredible-if very dark-and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your stories, now. Cheers!

A great story. Very well written.

ah. that was nice. It was like a strong alcoholic beverage. A nice kind of burning :D

This was too awful to imagine, Bravo.

interesting

Well written

delicious... image of the end as it might have happened, very nice... and I must say you write better than most of the fics I have read. I have no remarks. Except maybe you are disturbed, but aren't we all a little? ...good work

This is dark and beautiful, painful to read and conveying so much emotion in so few words. If only there were more stories like this. Wonderful.

Very well done, although it was pretty depressing. But the imagery was very effective, especially the bit about Celeborn. Good story, and a terrifying glimpse of an AU that, fortunately, didn't happen.