...-bursts into a fit of hysterical sobs-

I've read this story a gazillion times, and just now I've worked up the courage, and dried my eyes enough, to review.

This is one Hell of a story.

I just...love it, no matter how tragic it is.

You definately have a knack for this.

Poor Sarah.

her realization is just too little, too late.

This seems a bit... uh, pointless. Lots and lots of angst but with no explanations behind it.
On the upside, you can spell and punctuate fairly well, which puts you miles above many other writers here. I'd be interested in reading some more of your work, if it's better developed than this.

That was depressing. It made me cry. Yet for some odd reason I enjoyed it.

What the heck was that? Did Sarah go mentally insane?

What the heck was that? Did Sarah go mentally insane?

you killed him that sucked but well writtenplz r/r mine if you can.

Ohhhhhhhhhhh! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO sad! Loved it!

Naiya:)

AAAAAAAHHHHHH! THAT WAS SO DAMN SAD! YOU JUST RUINED MY HAPPY MOOD! DAMN YOU! I don't get happy moods often! DAMN YOU! ::Walks off to go sulk now::

boo hoo! that was so sad... oh, i'm crying! how awful is that?

That was good, but really sad! Could you write a sequel where Jareth comes back? Just an idea!

yipes. that's not romance

Omg. OMG! That was so sad but damn it was good! I don't normally r&r labyrinth stories but i've read all of the matrix ones. This was good, very good and it almost brought me to tears.

Wow... what can I say? Well written.. but oh so sad! Jareth... ;_;

Why'd you have to kill him! Good up until there though!

i CAN'T believe you made him die! it was SO good while it lasted! pLEASE write a sequel!