aww, poor harry.

nice

This story is really good! Realistic and fluent. Please keep writing Harry Potter fan fics, coz you are obviously very good at them.

THAT WAS AWSOME :) YOU'RE A GREAT WRITER.

is it over? not good, too short.

This is pretty good, altough some more detail would be appreciated. One thing that sucked a lot out of the story was Harry ignoring broken ribs, and then only wincing when Sirius hugged him. Bruised ribs? Maybe. Maybe he can grit his teeth, gather all of his strength, and perhaps stay concious or have a semi-clear thought process, but that was ludicrous. This is not a flame; it just the most constuctive criticism I've ever given. Oh! Also, the scenes where Harry's beaten are too quick, and don't allow the reader to be fully disgusted, angry, and/or horrified at the actions of his abuser and its results. Way too quick. I look forward to your next chapter. Good luck.

really good story, well done!

That was a really good story! Sad, but good. It's very well written, and I didn't catch any grammatical or spelling errors. Never give up!
Melissa

That was bloody fantastic. Wow. Impressive. I adored it! (call me weird, but Harry beatings are fun)

Very good job with the fic!

aka Very Curious CAT

aka Sirius Black

brilliant, true effort shines in this storyt like sunshine. Keep it up

T-T *sob* *whips out handkerchief* Man...what can I say? I'm a sucker for happy endings. I am also so very much wowed by such amazing story. The characterizations were perfect. I think that it very beautifully showed a different outlook on Harry that not many authors take. How can we expect Harry to just "deal" with everything? It was a wonderful story and I hope to read LOTS more of your stories. Please, NEVER stop writing!

I liked it! ;) Harry was tad too crazy but hey no one's perfect. lol

cool! I like! It's not done yet is it?

VERY GOOD, the best story i have read yet. i couldent stop reading it until i got to the end.!