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| TheRussianLunchLady 2008-03-25 ch 1,  | abuseI like how JackxRalph is here, RalphxRoger is here and JackxRoger, with still ALOT of depth and meaning. Slash and depth? Well done. :) |
| wild wolf free17 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abuseWell done. |
| Spideria 2005-11-26 ch 1, | abuseWow. I really, really like this. |
| SlytherinChick86 2005-11-25 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. |
| Sear 2005-11-22 ch 1, | abuseI am very impressed, by all your LotF fics to be honest. Dark, but that only fits with the story, intriguing and sexy. That Ralph is so very scared but still doesnt pull away, and that Jack's kiss isn't perfect - god, I almost melted! I'd so love to read a sequel to this one or to 'Choices' - More, want more! |
| Bonnie Mizuhara 2005-11-16 ch 1, | abuseWow, quite good, are you going to continue? Roger and Jack were always quite weird and I've taken a liking to Ralph. That was pretty good. I've always been into slash. |
| Hahukum Konn 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseInteresting slash. :) |
| Case Number 241 2005-11-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was good...but it could have been better! i really like the story line u had going until Jack kissed Ralph. i'm not saying that u should have taken it out...i loved the fact that somebody realized the slash undertones in this book...but u could have given the story alittle bit more before u had them kissing |
| Kodoku mousou 2005-11-08 ch 1, | abuseThis was awesome in a twisted, slashy way. Keep up the great work! Another story added to my c2! |
| Someone in grey 2005-10-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseAre you a fan of Roger?:)) That was good. Your "Butterfly" is fantastic. I love it. |
| cinema lover 2005-10-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! That was amazing!! I mean truly truly wonderful! Your speaking was great and every character was completely in place and, of course, the slash was AWEWSOME! Is this a one shot?? IT CANT BE! I NEED IT TO BE CONTINUED! Only, if you want to, of course. No pressure... |
| Intoxicate-me 2005-10-26 ch 1, | abuseThis story is kind of abstract, and twisted, but ultimately fascinating! You have marvellous writing skills, do keep it up! I adore LOTF slash! Yayness =D |
| the-real-mo 2005-10-25 ch 1, | abuseAh! That was excellent. I especially liked the ending... Sounds like a one-shot piece to me, but it would be so cool if you wrote a sequel or at least just continued this. |
| Les Lapins Mauvais 2005-10-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is really interesting, and kinda hot in a twisted way. I haven't read the book in ages, but this brought it all back. Great work! Also, I remember there was an interview with the author in which he said that he hadn't put girls on the island because he didn't want sex to be involved in the story. Guess he didn't realise the potential for slash! =) |