Short, but has potential. Good description, although it could be longer. Maybe feed your plot bunnies?

Short but sweet... you can really expand on this and get a longer story, I rewatched that ep. today, and you could do a lot more with it! I'm all for Zutara, but I don't mind Karu that much, either.

That was... a rather short one-shot, if I do say so myself.

Cute, but short.

Aw... I'm Karu too. I'm not alone! Cute! Whoah oddly enough that's what everyone one says about my little romance fic. Well it's cute and thankyou for writing it.

short... but very romantic. good job!

Really short, but the details were extraordinary!

"...And neither of them noticed or cared that their hands had slipped into each others."

Very cute. I like it.

That was worded so perfectly. Short but sweet (couldn't be sweeter). Poetic, beautiful, and definitely not lame.

My thoughts exactly.

Nice, sweet, short, and to the point. There are only select stories that work under 200 words, and yours is one of them. :D

I'm Anti Karu, but hey, that just shows how well-writte this was.

i like it

KARU! *Squeal* I love Karu! Okay, so maybe you took the first Karu fanfiction honor from me. But I will be the first full Karu story! ^_~ (Heheh that would be in like a month or more. I'm still working on the outline and stuff.)

~Sarah of