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Reviews for: The Sunset
Rise of Shadowmass
2009-10-17 . chapter 1
Short, but has potential. Good description, although it could be longer. Maybe feed your plot bunnies?
Riku's Seraph
2007-07-09 . chapter 1
Short but sweet... you can really expand on this and get a longer story, I rewatched that ep. today, and you could do a lot more with it! I'm all for Zutara, but I don't mind Karu that much, either.
TheEyesoftheTiger
2006-07-09 . chapter 1
That was... a rather short one-shot, if I do say so myself.

Cute, but short.
Reedhare
2006-03-26 . chapter 1
Aw... I'm Karu too. I'm not alone! Cute! Whoah oddly enough that's what everyone one says about my little romance fic. Well it's cute and thankyou for writing it.
hip-hop-star43
2006-02-19 . chapter 1
short... but very romantic. good job!
acursed1
2005-12-04 . chapter 1
Really short, but the details were extraordinary!
akamai
2005-11-06 . chapter 1
"...And neither of them noticed or cared that their hands had slipped into each others."
Wingsister
2005-11-06 . chapter 1
Very cute. I like it.
JillRG
2005-10-25 . chapter 1
That was worded so perfectly. Short but sweet (couldn't be sweeter). Poetic, beautiful, and definitely not lame.

My thoughts exactly.
Koikitten
2005-10-25 . chapter 1
Nice, sweet, short, and to the point. There are only select stories that work under 200 words, and yours is one of them. :D

I'm Anti Karu, but hey, that just shows how well-writte this was.
lopchop
2005-10-25 . chapter 1
i like it
SarahNev
2005-10-25 . chapter 1
KARU! *Squeal* I love Karu! Okay, so maybe you took the first Karu fanfiction honor from me. But I will be the first full Karu story! ^_~ (Heheh that would be in like a month or more. I'm still working on the outline and stuff.)

~Sarah of
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