Reviews for In The Stillness Between Moments

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just2spooky 2008-04-10 ch 16,	abuseJust found this and I love it! looking forward to the next chapter!
ravingrevolution 2008-02-01 ch 16,	abuseFantastic story, can't wait to read more!
Jabraille 2008-01-11 ch 3,	abuseI'd love to read this thoroughly, but I find the formatting and scarcity of punctuation oppressive to my eyes and mind. What I've read seems thoroughly researched and more than a little interesting, so I hope you have the time and inclination to make the editorial changes that would make the story accessible to squinty-eyed twits like me.
Nessa Leralonde 2008-01-02 ch 16,	abusewow,this is amazing! i can't wait until your next post! I love your style of writing. you are one of the few authors who can pull off the elves so perfectly. mostly they don't seem to feel right... they sortg of make them too human. and also, i'm really impressed with your knowledge of the elves! Can you actually speak Quenya or Sindarin, or do you just know little bits? anyway. This is an awsome story, and i CAN'T wait to read the rest!
Redone 2007-12-31 ch 16, anon.	abuseI know she's been slowly forgetting, but still, wouldn't it be nice if she could give a bit of hope to Thranduil? It's a long way to Greenwood even if Thranduil knows where to go. After all, what's the use of being a modern-day girl in ME if you don't know a thing about Tolkien canon - you might as well have created an original ME girl?
ever2green 2007-12-30 ch 16,	abuseIt has been a long time. I'm glad you're back. I'll be eagerly waiting your next chapter. Happy new year!!
Nelarun 2007-12-30 ch 16,	abuseThese chapters were great! Well done! Have a great Holiday Nela
Saber Apricot 2007-12-30 ch 2,	abuseDescribe the monsters a bit before the 'sacked by monsters' line. Describe how the city was beautiful a bit more. There is a lot of action. Your story starts where most don't makes it more interesting.
Saber Apricot 2007-12-30 ch 1,	abuseOoh boy, a poli sci major should know that 'third world' isn't really used anymore. The 'Global south' (or 'peripheral countries' even), but still all of the terms have their flaws ('third world' being one of the most insulting). The second paragraph reads like it comes from someone who doesn't know much about poli sci. It'd be best to cut the paragraph out and just strengthen the idea that Eruanna wants to do (human rights working, right) and why. She doesn't need to explain the difference between the out-of-date 3-world class system. It's 'anywhere' not 'any where' in, 'Yet, I was never any where near it.' Write out small numbers. Ex. One, two, forty-nine... I like that you're taking the time to explain how your character got her wilderness smarts. There is a lot of telling and not a lot of showing her. It'd be nice to describe the cliff more. It's not a bad chapter. I think that the whole Scottish and Gaelic thing is kind of interesting.
sian 2007-12-29 ch 16, anon.	abuseI'm quite liking this so far. It has a nice simplicity to it (although I'm wondering when Legolas will appear, though I might have missed it- I had to rush this reading unfortunately). The only thing I wasn't too keen on were the references to Scotland being chained to the British empire and so forth- I'm Welsh and this sort of Scottish shortbread-Nationalism put into fiction that doesn't even pertain to it (and by a foreigner [no offence!]) gets my goat a wee bit. But still, regarding the story: I'm enjoyint it. :)
Gladys 2007-12-22 ch 14, anon.	abuseI love your fanfic! The whole story seems so real ^^ I hoped that Anne Marie would be more than a mere human but it's you choice x( Please update soon!! :)
Sosaku-sama 2007-06-17 ch 14,	abuseI must say, one of the better original fiction characters I have read in a long time. I hope you will continue.
Nelarun 2007-02-02 ch 14,	abusereally really really good story. It is interesting to see all these elflings running around that are heros in the stories. I love it. Well done on producing dome very excellent writing, and characters. Nela
Cassiafistula 2006-09-27 ch 4, anon.	abusei like your story. it's not as shallow as some fics are... pls continue to work hard! =)
Norie 2006-09-19 ch 14,	abusehey this is a cool story. would love to see an update sometime soon

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