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| Warrior of Virtue 2006-05-01 ch 10,  | abuseOh this is going to be messy. Update soon. |
| Oni-Kaiser 2006-05-01 ch 10, | abusehurray! I was starting to lose hope. I'm pretty fond of the weapon building idea, its pretty cool. update soon, I love this story, Nuso is awesome. |
| nightdragon0 2006-05-01 ch 10, | abuseEven this place is threatened. Nuso really never seems to have an easy time with things, even when they're looking up. Reese seems to have more things to reveal now about her involvement with Nuso's past too...not all of them good. |
| Dachande663 2006-05-01 ch 10, | abuseExcellent chapter, I really like where this story is going. I don't care about having an update a week, just make sure when you do update they are as good as this chapter. |
| dumass44 2006-01-03 ch 9, | abuserealy nice. doesn,t seem like it needs any improvment other than the continuation of the fic. |
| Warrior of Virtue 2006-01-03 ch 9, | abuseThe plot thickens. Please continue. |
| Apsycho Spartan 2005-12-23 ch 8, | abuseLove it. I like the new Zealot world its cool and i like how they have a strick code of honor...the part wher Reese was forced into telling the story was hilarious...heheh puppy dog eyes... nice job hope u keep it up. Cant wait till' the next Chp. |
| nightdragon0 2005-12-19 ch 8, | abuseInteresting place... Seems this group is pretty much isolated from the rest of the Covenant wars and such, if I'm correct. No doubt they are 'different', but I'm curious at to why... |
| Warrior of Virtue 2005-12-13 ch 8, | abuseVery nice. I lok forward to the next installment. |
| Warp Ligia Obscura 2005-12-11 ch 7, | abuseIntriguing events, the truth about the Reavers and then some. Thrilling is your thing, ain't it...? |
| Warrior of Virtue 2005-12-10 ch 7, | abuseNow the fun starts. Update soon. |
| nightdragon0 2005-12-10 ch 6, | abuseThere's definitely some tension building up. For one, Nuso has pretty much never been welcomed by his 'own' people, and now he suddenly is. Even if he doesn't show it, it's got to be in the back of his mind somewhere. Much like his the memories of his father still pop up in such 'great detail' after all this time. |
| Warrior of Virtue 2005-12-09 ch 6, | abuseNice. Update soon. |
| nightdragon0 2005-12-05 ch 5, | abuseCertainly a deeper insight into the battles going on all round. In a way, it links everything nicely from the Alters to the Forerunners and the Flood. But with the 'Omega'...that's harder to guess. Very convient though, that Vesh decides to tell his entire tale. Unless there's more to it than just that... |
| dumass44 2005-12-04 ch 5, | abusegreat chapter, now the omega are... ...hm let me think could it be na... ...maybe no... ...a yas thier the no not thats not right... ... ok ive got it thier the grunts right? |