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| AlchemyGaara 2008-06-05 ch 4, | abuseFluffy. XD And yes, girls are very hot. But not as fun as guys. XD That's why i kinda wish me and my danna were a yaoi pair, not a yuri. XD ~Naomi |
| AlchemyGaara 2008-06-05 ch 3, | abuseTHANK YOU! I hate when authors publish either crap, or don't bother to fix typo's. They personally bug teh crap outa me in my own stories, that's why i fixed one chapter about three times when i kept noticing them. XD Smex. hehe. :) ~Naomi |
| i-see-faeries 2008-05-28 ch 4, | abuseI love this. I saw this story a million and one times and I never actually got around to reading it, but now I'm glad I did. I love this. It's cute, sexy, and funny at the same time. Great job. |
| Chromde 2008-05-09 ch 4, | abuseAww, I loved that. Sweet, sexy, cute. |
| maryjaneleaf 2008-03-15 ch 4, | abuseI like this one. It wasn't the average drunken club fic. This was tasteful and well-written. As opposed to common and ridiculous. |
| Addictedreader09 2008-01-27 ch 4, | abuselol luv naruto sometimes |
| shirilyle 2007-09-20 ch 4, | abusei like this story you should make a sequal to this story. |
| I don't have an account yet... 2007-08-02 ch 4, anon. | abuseHey, I think this is the best ** SasukexNeji chapter fic. I have read so far. Personally I think you're a great writer. The ending was a little crappy but it's fine with me! ;D |
| -kyuubi11- 2007-07-27 ch 4, | abusehey! CUTE!! |
| Elissa 2007-06-29 ch 4, anon. | abuseThat was an astonishing (sp?) story. I loved it. I really dont like chapter fics but you got me hooked with just the summary. I have horriable spelling btw if you couldnt tell. is my email if you want to email me. I would really enjoy talking to you. ^.^ |
| Anne Cwa 2007-05-25 ch 4, | abuseoh em gee that was exactly what i needed, i was in such a mood for a nejixsasu. i know it's an old story, but i often forget to search under "complete." :D anyway, it was great. i def plan on checking out your other stories now. and as a fellow author, i can understand the whole "losing interest half-way" ish. it has unfortunately happened in both my stories :( but with yours, i couldn't really tell. so again, good job! |
| kyari 2007-03-27 ch 4, | abuseaw, i do not think this was a bad story. it was quite interesting, to be truthful ^-^ |
| BloodyUchihaPast 2007-03-17 ch 4, | abuseaw! please update the story! me luffs it! |
| zzzDayDreamerzzz 2007-03-10 ch 4, | abusethis story's so hot! right more soon!! ^.^ |
| Cupcakes-R-Delicious 2007-03-09 ch 4, | abuseEh i can see your point that it was a little unfocused, but hey it was one hell of a yaoi. Also i gave me a wicked case of the giggles, especially the whole thing with how a straight man will end up grinding with a guy in leather and a handle bar mustache, hehehehehehehe. I was crying at that. Really if anything i can see that more as a starter for a much longer story, although BTHOOM if i know what you should write about to make it longer. But really dont beat yourself up to bad you did a good job. |