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AlchemyGaara
2008-06-05
ch 4,
abuseFluffy. XD
And yes, girls are very hot. But not as fun as guys. XD

That's why i kinda wish me and my danna were a yaoi pair, not a yuri. XD

~Naomi
AlchemyGaara
2008-06-05
ch 3,
abuseTHANK YOU! I hate when authors publish either crap, or don't bother to fix typo's. They personally bug teh crap outa me in my own stories, that's why i fixed one chapter about three times when i kept noticing them. XD

Smex. hehe. :)

~Naomi
i-see-faeries
2008-05-28
ch 4,
abuseI love this. I saw this story a million and one times and I never actually got around to reading it, but now I'm glad I did. I love this. It's cute, sexy, and funny at the same time. Great job.
Chromde
2008-05-09
ch 4,
abuseAww, I loved that. Sweet, sexy, cute.
maryjaneleaf
2008-03-15
ch 4,
abuseI like this one.
It wasn't the average drunken club fic.
This was tasteful and well-written.
As opposed to common and ridiculous.
Addictedreader09
2008-01-27
ch 4,
abuselol luv naruto sometimes
shirilyle
2007-09-20
ch 4,
abusei like this story you should make a sequal to this story.
I don't have an account yet...
2007-08-02
ch 4, anon.
abuseHey, I think this is the best ** SasukexNeji chapter fic. I have read so far. Personally I think you're a great writer. The ending was a little crappy but it's fine with me! ;D
-kyuubi11-
2007-07-27
ch 4,
abusehey!
CUTE!!
Elissa
2007-06-29
ch 4, anon.
abuseThat was an astonishing (sp?) story. I loved it. I really dont like chapter fics but you got me hooked with just the summary. I have horriable spelling btw if you couldnt tell. is my email if you want to email me. I would really enjoy talking to you. ^.^
Anne Cwa
2007-05-25
ch 4,
abuseoh em gee that was exactly what i needed, i was in such a mood for a nejixsasu. i know it's an old story, but i often forget to search under "complete."
:D anyway, it was great. i def plan on checking out your other stories now.
and as a fellow author, i can understand the whole "losing interest half-way" ish. it has unfortunately happened in both my stories :( but with yours, i couldn't really tell.
so again, good job!
kyari
2007-03-27
ch 4,
abuseaw, i do not think this was a bad story. it was quite interesting, to be truthful ^-^
BloodyUchihaPast
2007-03-17
ch 4,
abuseaw! please update the story! me luffs it!
zzzDayDreamerzzz
2007-03-10
ch 4,
abusethis story's so hot! right more soon!!
^.^
Cupcakes-R-Delicious
2007-03-09
ch 4,
abuseEh i can see your point that it was a little unfocused, but hey it was one hell of a yaoi. Also i gave me a wicked case of the giggles, especially the whole thing with how a straight man will end up grinding with a guy in leather and a handle bar mustache, hehehehehehehe. I was crying at that. Really if anything i can see that more as a starter for a much longer story, although BTHOOM if i know what you should write about to make it longer. But really dont beat yourself up to bad you did a good job.
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