I did like; it's on my faves list for a reason. I just thought I'd point something out. :)

'That's quite a left-handed compliment.' Don't you mean 'back-handed compliment'?

It's okay about the Kel bashing. I guess Alan could feel resentful towards her. Is the father Dom? I love the Lianne/Alan. It's one of my favourite pairings. And the scene in which he has to explain to Gary, the Stump and Numy. Great writing.

This is amazingly good! I love your portrayal of Kel (mostly because I agree with Alan, lol), and Alanna. PLEASE keep writing!! I'm begging you! If you need ideas or something email me

oh my goodness!! awesome!

Awesome, i loved it!

oo that was jolly! i loved it!

THIS IS SO NOT A ONE SHOT STORY! I WANT MORE! MORE MORE!!

This is really good. Please continue! I can't wait to see what happens!

Oh yes, very cute. Very, very, very cute.

hey, just letting you know that i read and liked your story. i'd like to read more of it if your interested in writing more, but if your not thats ok. its not often that there's a decent fic from a male perspective!
anyway, catch ya later

This was good, you should definetly continue.

yay!

someone has written an Alan/Lianne! thankyou, thankyou, THANKYOU! and you have Kel as a perfect example of her 'Blandina' (as she has been dubbed at the Dove on ezboard) state. fantastic!!

i wanted an Alan/Lianne for so long (a good one!) i've even started planning my own (probably will be a disaster...anyway... ~^_^~)
GOOD fic. very good!
I love the beginning of this story.. just keep letting Alan dig himself into a nice, big hole... tee hee hee -great!! ~^_^~

this fic isgoing on y fav. stories and story alert... so UPDATE SOON! please! ~^_^~

Oh, funny as! lol. Great fic, and yes, do write more!

Oh, yay. Just the other day I was wondering what had happend to this story. I'm so glad that you're going to continue it...it has the stuff I like in TP Fanfic
Minor characters such as the Royal children and
Alanna's kids. Alan's POV is refreshing... I also must be one of the few people in TP fandom who
isn't a fan of Keladry. I'd like to see her apologize to Alan, too.

Please please please continue.
Marisa
See, I'm putting this story on my Favorites List. SO now you have to update.
Cheers.