 LadySparrowJack 2006-04-23 . chapter 4Oh... my... Our man's surely in trouble now, isn't he... When the voice in your head is your partner in detection... Glad to see this one being updated - all the muses must be in a cooperative mood these days, eh!
Hope things are well on your end - much love to you, as always... and to all "the boys"... ;)
LSJ |
 Dawnie-7 2006-04-20 . chapter 4Aw. See what a good fight can do! |
 sands' gal 2006-04-20 . chapter 4I love this. Glad you updated again. |
 Nuky 2005-11-15 . chapter 3This line is just ** briljant: "Look, Mort, we can discuss the decorating tips LATER." Sands snapped.
You got some humor! Please continu
luvz Sue-AnneSparrow |
 Nuky 2005-11-15 . chapter 1""It's OVER Cerise! Even if he's not locked up in some mental hospital somewhere, he's lost his career here! They're not going to take him back with a head like that!" Jenna spat back." WHAT A **! She talks like he's a freak! the **...
I really like this story, so ganna read, and stop writhing.
Luvz Sue-AnneSparrow |
 Dawnie-7 2005-11-06 . chapter 3Mort eh? A little Secret Window reference maybe? I love how you had this chapter play out. Well down. And loved the song at the end. That was beautiful. |
 Dawnie-7 2005-10-25 . chapter 2Pink eh? Very interesting :) |
 Dawnie-7 2005-10-25 . chapter 1Nice idea. I like it so far, and the new character. And expecially the use of Pink Floyd. |