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JaxsLady 2007-09-13 ch 24,	abuseSurprise Ending to a very well thought out trilogy. Good storyline, good progression, kept the readers engaged in the story and wanting to read more. Editing was fairly good, some slip ups, with their and there, but nothing that would detract from the story. Some short chapters and some longer ones. I seem to harp on this subject, don't I. Fortunately, in the context of reading all 24 chapters in one sitting, then short chapters are not a problem but I might be frustrated if I were to read them one by one. But as I said before, if the story is good, and so far, all your stories have been quite intriguing. I have enjoyed seeing this side of Jack. It humanizes him and lets us see behind his clear blue eyes. So often in 24, we only get to see a bit of Jack's emotional side, yet we, as television viewers, know that he is pained every time he has to kill someone, torture someone or be involved in something distasteful. You have permitted us to see that side of Jack. Great Job!!
Barb 2007-02-25 ch 24, anon.	abuseGreat story. Thank you for a great evening, I enjoyed it from begining to end.
MJ 2006-09-30 ch 20, anon.	abuseThe ending with Kim was perfect. She said just the right things to help her Dad and herself heal. Please don't say this is the end. I need a reunion between Jack and Palmer! Great work on this story! I've loved it. Will be looking for more from you. MJ
Angel-agent 2006-09-30 ch 24, anon.	abuseSuch a great story this was! I liked how it dealt with everything.
Saskfan 2006-09-19 ch 19, anon.	abuseAw, you can't just end there. Please update soon. Great story!
Angel-agent 2006-09-19 ch 19, anon.	abusethis is such a great story! I absolutely love it!
MJ 2006-09-14 ch 17, anon.	abuseThe conversation between Tony and Jack was absolutely perfect. It was exactly what Tony would say to his friend Jack. And who would understand better than Tony who was imprisoned for treason after trying to save Michelle, just as Jack tried to save Kim. Tony is the best possible medicine for Jack right now. I think Jack is finally getting back to himself and understanding that what happened was not his fault. You are doing a wonderful job with portraying the agonizing mental and physical journey back to life of a man who has been tortured extensively. I applaud your story and look forward to more.
MJ 2006-09-08 ch 16, anon.	abuseGreat chapters! I feel really good about how well Jack is progressing. And now he is going to see Tony! Yippee! He's had to come a long way, but he's finally getting back to the old Jack. This is such a wonderful story. Keep it coming.
MJ 2006-08-19 ch 12, anon.	abuseOkay, now you've really got me wondering what is up with Palmer. Did he not get Jack's messages? I can't believe he wouldn't have called Jack immediately if he had. What is going on? I love this story and am thrilled when I see updates. Please keep writing this! Thanks so much for this excellent story. MJ
Sphinx87 2006-08-12 ch 10,	abuseI like your development of the story line. You got Chase to deliver the message to Jack, that there is no one condemning him for his actions, but himself. And he almost starts to believe it, until the last paragraph of Chapt 10. He's figuring that Heller & Palmer have been ignoring him, not at all. He pushed them away, they stayed away out of respect for Jack. Jack will have to be the one to let them know that it's OK to approach. Jack will have to communicate to them, that he wants them to contact him. Great going! Please keep going with this story, as time permits you to do so. I really have been enjoying reading it. Thank you! Nina
MJ 2006-04-25 ch 9, anon.	abuseThere, you see! Chase is good for Jack. He is a good friend and I loved your portrayal of him in this chapter. I just hope Jack really listened to him. My only criticism here is this was way too short! I need more! Excellent story! MJ
MJ 2006-04-13 ch 8, anon.	abuseIt's so good that Jack is going out with Chase. He really really needs to go out into the world and he needs to renew his friendships. Chase is a good friend and a member of the family. Great work once again. I love this story!
AMP53 2006-04-08 ch 8, anon.	abuseAw. Jack's finally going out with Chase to clear the air. I can hardly wait until the next update! Write on, Bob, write on!
Slug's bay 2006-04-07 ch 8,	abuseI agree with Jack, it's no good tiptoeing around people. His decision to go out was fine. "“You okay Jack, why don’t you take a seat,” he said, hoping to make him feel comfortable. “I was wondering,” Jack said quietly, “if you wanted to go for a drink… if you have the time or something…”" Jack could use the trip too. Keep going, I really enjoy all your fics.
slinki 2006-02-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseIs there more? I love this story! I need more

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