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Linda
2007-06-28
ch 4, anon.
abuseWOOWW!! That was...WOW! I loved it! WOWOWWOWOW! Gippal was ready to jump!? Commit suicide?! Ekk! aw, I think Rikku helped him. aww shes always there LOL, anyways I wan konw more! I fell in love with the story! :)
Linda !
2007-06-28
ch 2, anon.
abuseWow. That was amazing. So well thought out! Its so beautiful the way you decribe about the stars and there being hope. People making mistakes, but no matter what more hope comes. WOW! This truley is amazing! :)
X-PANIC
2007-03-23
ch 4,
abuseawesome story you have me hooked..i wanna see whats gonna go down:)..keep it up:D
Opaque.Heart
2006-03-12
ch 4,
abuse*sniffle* Poor dramatic Gippal *sniffle* I wonder (and if you have already said so, I've forgotten...sorry) what this thing is that Gippal is so melancholy over...*ponders* Well. I can't wait to find out who is holding Gippal back and what is 'wrong' with him...
Opaque.Heart
2006-03-12
ch 3,
abuseWow. That was really dramatic and emotional. I can feel poor Gippal's pain...

I don't agree with you too much, it isn't all that confusing, but I'm not a normal person, so confusing to me is obvious to everyone else, and vice versa...so yeah...

I'm sorry it took me so long to review! I'm going to attempt to stay caught up now! I hope that will last...so I'm going on to chapter 4!
marajade963
2006-03-10
ch 4,
abuseYou have got to finish this!! I cant wait to see how this plays out!!
BlazingxSoul
2006-03-08
ch 4,
abuseOmg! You know, not knowing what Gippal's "illness" is is really driving me off the edge... can't wait to read the next chapter.

You set this chapter up beautifully. Made sure that you caputered the audience, then left out an important clue. That makes me want to read, and thus I'm taping my fingers waiting for your next chapter.

You really are too good at this. ^_^
BlazingxSoul
2006-03-08
ch 3,
abuseArgh! WHAT came back?!?!?!
BlazingxSoul
2006-03-08
ch 1,
abuseOh I really liked that... I really did... I couldn't tell you one thing that jumped out and made my day. It really was the entire chapter. Well written. Then again, I didn't really expect anything different from such a wonderful writer... ^_^
kairiyuna15
2006-02-28
ch 4, anon.
abusehey kathleen. it's me. i loved this chapter. hmm i going to take a guess and say that it was Rikku, that pulled him back, though it could've been Kimhair (i kow i misspelled that , wow a bit sad, i forgot how to spell his name. lol. please update soon. please. :)
Shakai
2006-02-28
ch 4,
abuseI don't know why i never read chapter 3... but i just read the entire thing again to make up for it ^_^
I wonder what his illness is, is it an actual illness that makes him ill or is it depression or something like that.
Rikku saves him doesn't she... or maybe she doesnt! Maybe it's Nooj, he seems like a mentor kind of guy, and would be the perfect person to try and stop him from jumping, since he used to be a deathseeker.

I eagerly await the next chapter. *eager dance*
Squeek.

ps. I really like Gippal now, his attitude reminds me of Reno, and I basically fall in love with anything Reno-related. I saw a guy with long red hair the other day and I wanted to follow him and make him my pet Reno. *sigh*
Jezzi
2006-02-28
ch 4,
abuseOh! She saved him! Yay! I love this fic. I'm still really confused. What illness? Uhm... what did they call it. Sin's Toxin? Yeah, anyways, good job. I'm at school so I can't comment much, I really like your use of the non-colour though. It's very different, but it makes sense.
MissNeC
2006-02-28
ch 4,
abuseWow! Really good, this story is so symbolic and deep! Love it! Nasty cliffhanger though! UPDATE!
Jezzi
2006-02-06
ch 3,
abuseThis is brilliant. Complicated and confusing, but brilliant.
AirGrl
2006-01-31
ch 3, anon.
abuseBeautiful and touching. You get the Connection discussed in the game too. Lovely> Please Continue the story
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