 Hoples 2007-12-06 . chapter 4*is beaten up* I hate those guys... *takes hers cookie and smiles* Oh... I have wait so long for this little pice of chocolate! *Ed appears from behind her and takes her cookie* NO! TT_TT
Ling... hehe... tasty *smirk* |
 Hoples 2007-12-06 . chapter 3*treble in corner* Uh... Im afraid! *three shadows appear* I realy dont hit Ed with that pan! It was him! *cry out* To late nobody will hurt my pet. *looks on them* HOLY ** You say that all of those fanfictions out there are true?!
Oh I like Als dark side... *grins* |
 Hoples 2007-12-06 . chapter 2Ed... you... MANIPULATIVE LITTLE BASTARD! *hit Ed wit fring pan* Uh oh... *Ed is uncoucious* **! *looks around and run away*
Again great work with character, how you have describe Ed and his sins... *smiles* Just great! |
 Hoples 2007-12-06 . chapter 1Oh... My... Roy si viollent! O.O *lock ed in alchemi prove room* If you hurt him once again I will break every bone in your body! *flames of rage appears behind her* But if you promise you will be nice to him I will give him back... *smile*
Nice how you describe roy! Go you! |
 flamealchemist15 2006-03-12 . chapter 4This is really funny! Please update soon! |
 Youkai Of Hearts 2006-01-30 . chapter 1Hmm interesting ^_^ |
 flame gazer 2005-10-31 . chapter 4love it! more plz!
~tiff |
 flame gazer 2005-10-30 . chapter 3new side to al, love it!!
~tiff |
 flame gazer 2005-10-30 . chapter 2another great chappie!!
~tiff |
 flame gazer 2005-10-30 . chapter 1damn!! that was good!!
~tiff |