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Reviews for: The Desitiny of Two Brothers
Shining Peridot Moon 7/7/07 . chapter 3
Hahahahaha! Please update soon!
Rumoi 5/21/07 . chapter 3
hahahahaah *falls to ground clutching sides heaving with laughter*

that's too funny and mean!

great story

i will keep reading it if you keep posting it (hopefully you post it before a year has past)
AijinDaiku 11/10/06 . chapter 3
Its a good idea but it's going a little too fast for my taste. And I think Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru shouldn't have revealed themselves so early in the story, maybe wait a little longer and experience more in each others skin. Anyways I look forward to reading more about it. _ Aijin Daiku
Hasso 11/8/06 . chapter 3
Ah I like I’m glad kagome still love inuyasha that just show how strong love is. Keep it up great story should deserve credits.
Hasso 11/7/06 . chapter 2
Yay i love a good bodyswitch & inuyasha eat dirt in sessy-chan body. Ha can't wait to see that, i wonder how big of a dent could sessy-chan body make? It it taller & bigger then Inuyasha body ack who knows. I'm with you all the way.

one more thing who can travel to the other side of the well? & would naraku make their life hellish once he found out?
Starlight Socrates 11/6/06 . chapter 1
Hey, you should continue this! I love the premise, and the mysterious Michiko... D
heartsinlove51 3/9/06 . chapter 1
this is funny!
Hasso 11/16/05 . chapter 1
dude i hope you write some more make it deep and flashy, i dure you to wow me.
eyeofevil 11/3/05 . chapter 1
pritty interesting, wonder whats gonna happen next hehe
The-world-needs-peace 10/30/05 . chapter 1
Yeah that was short! What the heck? I wanna know what happens goddamn you!

#Ahem#

The story was okay, but the writing style has some room for improvement. Like, what kind of place were they in? Was it an open field? A rocky plain? A forest? I'd like to know for next time.
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