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Anithene 7/29/04 . chapter 5
\O_O/ WHAT! YOU MADE THEM DIE? oh well...that kinda sounds like Romeo and JUliet type thingy. I'm adding you to my fav. stories! PLEASE! DO SOMETHING ABOUT A SEQUAL! :( this story is great!
kyouhi 2/9/02 . chapter 5
i hated the ending! daikirai yo! i do like this fic though since its SOujiro/Misao!
Toraneko 11/27/01 . chapter 1
IDIOT DONNA ! HOW DARE YOUU ! TEME...
the Cheshire Cat 11/22/01 . chapter 1
hey there! good for a first fic. although i was a little blurred out by the paragraphing. must be the upload. good job, i hope to read more of your works.
hell flamez 11/3/01 . chapter 5
confusing and, i m gonna kill u si-deh!
someone 9/3/01 . chapter 5
eh..that was...short
Jo 8/28/01 . chapter 5
This sounds soooo much like you Donna! Like you, I don't really like the ending too. If only they lived on to marry and you know what! Misao? Soo weak? I don't think she'll die from just what? ONE wound? She'll most prob call Sou Seta like Kenshin. Don't kill me in school k?
natsumi oshiro 7/19/01 . chapter 1
why do both characters have to die at the end, why can't soujiro become a wanderer back agian?
Toraneko 7/3/01 . chapter 3
are u mad ? shinshio spell wrong liaoz !
kljsadfoiargmioawojrgaskl 6/8/01 . chapter 5
You make me cry.
Black Jade 6/2/01 . chapter 5
! YOU MADE THEM DIE! NONONONONONONONONONONO!
dragon's fire 5/31/01 . chapter 5
I am *so* going to *love* this pairing! _ Cool story ... even though they both died in the end... *snif* so sad but kawai!_
mc 5/26/01 . chapter 5
in shock...
Himura Mizuki 5/26/01 . chapter 5
OoooOOooo! A soujirou/Misao romance! Kawaii! Continue, PLEASE
Ayame-chan 5/25/01 . chapter 5
_ weeeelll, since you've reviewed my fic, i might as well as review yours, ne? very interesting is what i say demo you're chapters are too short! misao and soujiro *do* make a perfect couple if you think about it, which is good for alternate pairings, ne? sad ending, but i kinda got a bit confused between the previous chapter and the last one. ya need to add something in between the 6 months that they were together, ya know? and how they began to know each other better. oh, i dunno, like...misao and soujiro depart for a while before they coincidentally meet each other again and soujiro makes some enemies who are after him and...uh...um...never mind. how about this: make a sequel for this fic and have misao act as a guardian angel for sou-kun and add some lil tidbits here and there how they began to know each other better. flashbacks, ya know? and then incorporate a lil' love triangle in between by introducing a new character or somethin' like that. well, that's my suggestion fer now! i haven't had that much sleep so...'till next time!

Ayame-chan
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