Lovely... :)

Well! This is a nice poem. It's a whole lot better than mine, that's for sure!

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That was a really good poem and very deep. It was amazingly written and you are a very good writer!

That's really beautiful. (Goin' straight to the favourites!)

Oh my God...that was THE BEST! I've never ever read anything like that before. Write some more! My life depends on it!

Hey, neat! I really liked the way each Crest made a reference to the one following it, and how Light led back to Courage - really a nice touch. :) Good work.

Interesting. I liked the format you used, how you connected each stanza to the next.

A beautiful job. I love how everything is connected.

Yay! A great poem, Akki. _

DA

Very nice, imaginative and well-written. Good job. Keep up the good work...

-Jonasan Khushrenada