Another well done chapter, this is a really good story.

I like how she didn't know what a galka was. I think it was very cleaver, actually. I have to admit, that the way you explained how Galka's are reborn made a lot more since then anything I have herd before.

Keep up the good work. =)

I like this story so far. I think this is a very good start to a good fan fic.

The only thing that I saw wrong with it is that you didnt put a space between each paragraph. I don't mean to come off as a know it all, but this would make it easier for me (and I am sure others) to read your fic.

-Weigraf