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FallingWindows
2006-01-04
ch 1,
abuseFriend...It's lilly...That was great! I love you dear. Haha! I liked how they jinxed James. Morgy sent me the ling so there! see you tomorrow

tiger lil
gloriaklompen
2005-10-29
ch 1,
abuseI came on here just for you :) I love-love-love R/S, it's my favorite pairing that isn't really bizzare, so YAY! I really enjoyed the tone of the story; it was all happy and I think you captured both their personalities really well.

I should go wrap your present now :-D
Least Complicated
2005-10-28
ch 1,
abuseSKETCHY! I like it a lot, but I feel like suspense should have been built up to the romance with a few chapters.
Dude Wheres My Cheese
2005-10-27
ch 1,
abuseheehee. So cute. Like Morgan, I really like how outgoing Remus was. Sirius is often the aggressive one, but I think this worked really well. I love teh slashiness and the part where he called him a pouf was really scary. I think I would have died if Sirius didn't change his mind. But really, how could he resist Remus? It's weird how people consider Remus to be so shy, when really he's not! As a professor, he was really pretty outgoing and far from a pushover, and just because he's softspoken we think he can't take charge! But he can!

One thing, and here comes the geek in me...I'm pretty sure only really skilled wizards can "Obliviate" people and not cause serious damage to their brains and ** them up for life, and it needs to be done pretty carefully. But the story was so awesome that I can let it go. LOL.
keisan
2005-10-27
ch 1,
abusehahahahhahahahah that was too good! Ah...Sirius was gonna finish what 'he' started? Lol...sure sure he can try and take the credit XD, but we know the real truth XD.
Holy Pancake
2005-10-26
ch 1,
abuseOh, that was funny! So, was Sirius gay or just horny? It was great anyway...
marauders4
2005-10-25
ch 1,
abuseThat was a really good story. You had me a little scared when Sirius called Remus a pouf, but you made everything better so it's cool.
lilmissdiss
2005-10-25
ch 1,
abuseThat was a really good story! please upate soon! You should check mine out and let me know if its any good, its my first story and I only have one chapter up so far and I don 't want to keep updating if it isn't any good so if you have time could you check it out its called The Game

lilmissdiss
grasshopperon
2005-10-25
ch 1,
abuseOMG!! This is so BEAUTIFUL! I LOVE it!! I could totally pictute it all so wonderfully and then when Sirius called Remus a pouf I though I was going to die and was all, "No, no, no! oh, poor Remus!" That would have been SOO embarrassing if it hadn't turned out different! And I also really love the way it's Remus who initiates all the action. I dunno why, but in my mind I always imagined Sirius would make the first move. And...oh god...you're making me a big bad Remus/Sirius shipper! Please write more of them, this was just too beautiful!

(And this kissing was VERY beautiful)
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