Not ur best work. Since ive read all your other Alnel fics but its okay.

O! That is so sweet! I makes me want to cry!! Um...please, I know I'm a bit weird, but I really like it! please write different stories too, okay?

Bijoux: Aww, ain't that cute ^-^
I don't really know the song though...*gasp* Downloading spree!! No wait...the downloader thingy doesn't work anymore...bah, stupid authorities...meh...nice job! And don't worry about the OOCness...it wasn't too bad...I've written numerus stories on another section where everyone's dumber than what they are...meh...OOCness being a crime should be a crime in some cases...-.-

~Bijoux~ o,O

no worries! ^^ brill, brillianto, terrific, excell, etc, etc. as for the OoC, it was only a little! not as much as mine, so yeah! keep it up!

Actually, I COULD see Nel running into a burning house to save a child...but yeah, after that it does get somewhat OOC...'Specially Albel, heh. ;)

The occasional typo, not too bad. Hope to see some more fics!

Aw...so cute! Write more!

Yeah, they are a little - Okay, a bit more then a little out of character but that made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I could really see this more as a Fayt/Sophia fic...and I like that pair so that's a compliment. Though, with the OOC, I can see Nel running into a burning building so it started in character (IMHO). And sometimes, boredom and dreams can be the best inspiration! :)